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The Night the Sky Caught Fire

No more eating cheese before bedtime

By Marie381Uk Published 3 months ago 3 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Night the Sky Caught Fire

It began with whispers carried through small towns and quiet cities. People spoke of a light that would tear across the heavens, brighter than any star we had ever known. The scientists called it Comet C 2025 41, but to most it became the Fire Tail, a name that felt older, something our ancestors might have whispered when the world was still young. On October twenty first, they said, it would come close enough to see the ice melt from its skin, close enough to make the night burn.

I did not believe the talk at first. The world is full of things promised and never seen. Yet as the date drew near, something changed in the air. The evenings grew sharper, the stars clearer, as if the sky itself was preparing for what was to come. Children sat out with blankets and mugs of chocolate, while the old gathered in silence, remembering other nights, other omens. The city lights dimmed that week, as if everyone agreed to give the heavens back their stage.

When the night came, I stood on the hill beyond the churchyard. The wind was still, the trees hushed. Then it appeared. A streak of white fire tearing across the velvet dark, its tail stretching wider than any river I had ever seen. It was not silent, not really. There was a low hum that seemed to come from the ground itself, like the earth was singing in awe. For a moment I forgot to breathe.

People began to cry. Some prayed, others laughed. A man beside me fell to his knees and whispered a name I did not know. It was not fear, it was something deeper. The comet glowed like a living thing, bright enough to turn night into day. You could see the reflection of its fire in every window, on every roof, across the still waters of the lake below.

For hours it hung there, drifting slowly past the world. Its light brushed against clouds that looked like smoke from ancient fires. I thought of how it had travelled fifteen thousand years to reach us. How many eyes had once watched it before? How many worlds had it passed without a soul to see?

When it began to fade, a kind of sorrow fell upon us. The hum softened until it was gone, leaving only the silence of the night. I stayed long after others had left, staring at the place where the light had vanished. The air smelled faintly of rain and dust.

The next morning the world felt different. The sky was pale and strange, as if the comet had taken something with it. People spoke softly, as though afraid to break whatever it had left behind. Children drew pictures of the blazing tail, lovers swore new promises, and the old said they had seen the face of God.

I do not know what I saw that night. Perhaps it was only a rock and ice, drifting through time and luck. Or perhaps it was a reminder, that we are small beneath the endless dark, and yet lucky enough to witness beauty that will never return. The Fire Tail is gone now, but sometimes, when the wind is still, I swear I can hear that low hum again, deep in the ground, waiting for the next light to pass our way.

No comets where killed in writing this story. It as it’s all arrived to my pen by deep made up thought. Thoughts from a over stimulated dream, after eating cheese before bedtime. Suppose you could say it’s a very cheesy story.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    Comets are a piece of Heaven and Space, and they could also be messages sent by others or Him telling us to think before we leap. Good job.

  • That is a wonderful story, and comets can look incredible, as long as they don't hit the Earth

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