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The coast on the map

β€˜Clouds in the Summer’ Chapter 2

By Starlight TuckerPublished 3 years ago β€’ Updated 8 months ago β€’ 2 min read
Top Story - July 2023
The coast on the map
Photo by Tamas Tuzes-Katai on Unsplash

Chapter 2

π™³πšŽπšŠπš› π™Ύπš•πš π™΅πš›πš’πšŽπš—πš,

𝙸 πšπš‘πš˜πšžπšπš‘πš 𝙸 πšπš’πšπš—β€™πš πš πšŠπš—πš πšŠπš—πš’πšπš‘πš’πš—πš, πš‹πšžπš 𝙸 πš πšŠπš—πšπšŽπš 𝚝𝚘 πšπšŽπš•πš• 𝚒𝚘𝚞 πšŠπš‹πš˜πšžπš πšπš‘πšŽ πšŒπš˜πš–πšŽπšπš’πšŽπšœ πšŠπš—πš πšπš›πšŠπšπšŽπšπš’πšŽπšœ πšπš‘πšŠπš πš‘πšŠπš™πš™πšŽπš—πšŽπš πš’πš— πšπš‘πšŽ πš‹πš•πšŠπš—πš” πšœπš™πšŠπšŒπšŽπšœ 𝚘𝚏 πš–πš’ πšŠπš•πš˜πš—πšŽ πšπš’πš–πšŽ. 𝚈𝚘𝚞 πš›πšŽπš–πš’πš—πš πš–πšŽ 𝚘𝚏 𝚊 πšπš’πš–πšŽ πš πš‘πšŽπš— 𝙸 𝚜𝚊𝚠 πš–πš˜πš›πšŽ πš™πš˜πšπšŽπš—πšπš’πšŠπš•. π™°πš πšπš‘πšŽ πšŽπš—πš 𝚘𝚏 πšπš‘πšŽ 𝚍𝚊𝚒, 𝚠𝚎 πš πšŽπš›πšŽ πš“πšžπšœπš πšπšŠπš•πš”πš’πš—πš.

"It's like she's left me with all of this unfinished business. I’m feeling really-” Oakley throws the letter near the messy open box β€œ-manipulated.”

β€œThey’re not dated.” Jay places the letter he was reading back to the center of the table. β€œI can’t even believe you kept them this long. It’s been three weeks. I would've thrown them away a long time ago.”

''You wouldn't have hidden them around the city, huh? That doesn't sound like fun?”

''She wants you to go after her. Wishes you’d marry her. You should find out where she is and leave them around there- that would be a good way to get her back. ''

''It’s not about getting her back. She doesn't think I'd actually go after her. Always assumes she knows how I’m going to react."

''Remember when we really didn’t want you to talk to her?''

"Yeah, I should've listened."

"Told you. So you think it's Oregon?"

"I don't know. That was where she said she wanted to go."

"Probably Portland. That’s like a planet for artists. My dad's actually got a property for sale in Portland. Takes forever to sell. We could literally go all the way there and chill if we wanted to. I actually think that sounds like a good time. Do you want to get out of here for the fourth? I don't work that Monday and the shop is closed on the fourth anyway."

"That’s like two weeks away? I’ll have to see what’s going on with work. She could be anywhere honestly. Small town, big city, and I don't need to know.”

β€œNo, you don’t, obviously.”

β€œI lost touch with her for a reason.”

"Get rid of the letters then. Don’t even read them. Iβ€˜m uncomfortable just staring at them. You remember that argument she was having with me around the campfire?"

"Yeah. That was hilarious though, what you were saying about the heartbreak music she was playing. β€˜Like that’s our shit- why do they have to play it like that and perform it all over the world?’"

"It's true. Anyway, I have to go but I'll see what's up with Portland. You know he's cool with it so be ready to hear back from me about this weekend.” Jay picks up his keys and places his sunglasses on top of his head.

Oakley closes the box having not finished the letter he had began to read. After Jay leaves, he opens up the map on his phone and stares at the towns along the Oregon coast.

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Starlight Tucker

Full Sail University | Master of Fine Arts in Creative Writing

Drama/Romance | Science Fiction | Feature Articles

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  • Mood Rescue 2 years ago

    Miss tucker can you tell me how to delete a post on vocal?

  • I loved it, keep going πŸ’•πŸ’–

  • Way of writing is commendable. Really like how to put pictures in article .

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Entertaining and fun read!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ’•

  • Sarah D3 years ago

    Nicely written! Made for nice reading. Recommend another short story about mermaids! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/an-irrevocable-dream-about-a-mermaid%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E the story is a bit naughty

  • Naveedkk 3 years ago

    Congratulations!!

  • The Wanderer3 years ago

    Enjoyed the read! Surely one of the cool writers :)

  • A fun read! You’re a great writer!

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