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The Clockmaker’s Secret

Some clocks don’t measure time. They measure fate.

By Echoes by Shafi--Published 6 months ago 5 min read

A Strange Shop in a Forgotten Village

In the heart of a fog-veiled village, nestled between a forgotten bakery and an abandoned tailor’s shop, stood a curious little storefront with a creaky wooden sign that read:

“Avery’s Timepieces – Repairs & Mysteries.”

The townsfolk called it the clockmaker’s shop, though few ever stepped inside. Some said the man who owned it, Mr. Elias Avery, could mend more than broken gears. Others whispered he could turn back time—for a price.

But no one knew for sure. The man was always there, always the same—tall, silver-haired, blue-eyed, and untouched by time. Some swore he looked the same as he did thirty years ago.

The Watch That Wouldn’t Die

One rainy afternoon, Clara Halden, seventeen and soaked to the bone, pushed open the door. Her boots squeaked on the wooden floor, and the sound of ticking clocks embraced her from every wall. The smell of oil and old wood filled the room like a memory.

She wasn’t there for a repair.

She was there for an answer.

Three years ago, on the same rainy day, her father had vanished. No note, no sign, no goodbye. The only thing left behind was a broken pocket watch engraved with the initials “E.A.”—found in the attic, lifeless and rusted. She had tucked it away in a drawer, convinced it was a dead relic.

But that morning, the watch had started ticking.

Clara placed it gently on the counter. “I think this might be yours.”

Elias Avery’s Revelation

Mr. Avery looked up from behind his desk, spectacles perched on his nose, hands stained with oil. He studied her face before shifting his eyes to the watch.

“Or perhaps,” he said, “it’s yours now.”

Clara furrowed her brow. “It belonged to my father. The day he disappeared, this watch stopped. But today… it started ticking again.”

Avery took the watch in his hands with a kind of reverence. “This is no ordinary timepiece,” he said. “It doesn’t measure time. It measures possibility.”

“Possibility?” Clara echoed.

He turned the watch over and pressed on a small, hidden dial. The air thickened. The ticking silenced. Every clock in the shop stopped simultaneously.

And then the room changed.

The Corridor of Choices

The walls dissolved into mist. The floor turned to glass. Around them stretched an infinite corridor of floating doors, suspended in a dark, starless void. Each door was unique—some tall and golden, others carved of stone or twisted steel. They pulsed faintly, as if breathing.

Clara gasped. “What is this place?”

Elias stood calmly beside her. “This is the corridor of choices. Every door leads to a version of reality shaped by a decision once made—or not made at all.”

She turned in place, staring at the hundreds, maybe thousands, of doors. “My father. Did he…?”

A very nodded. “Three years ago, he came here. He used the watch and chose a door he could not return from.”

“But why?” Clara whispered.

“To give you a better life,” he said gently. “He saw futures where he failed you. And others where he succeeded—at great personal cost.”

Clara stepped toward a door with a brass handle shaped like a leaf. It pulsed softly, calling to her.

“Can I find him?” she asked.

“You can try,” Avery replied. “But once you walk through a door, the version of you that returns may not be the same.”

Clara hesitated. But then she thought of her childhood laughter, of bedtime stories her father used to tell—always about time, always about destiny.

She took the handle.

Light swallowed her whole.

Another Version of Home

She awoke in the same village—or so she thought.

The streets were familiar, but the world was not. Towering buildings of glass curved toward the clouds. Transparent pods floated silently along rails above the streets. Trees shimmered with holographic leaves. Drones delivered mail to floating boxes.

Her old house was gone, replaced by a sleek dome with vines growing in geometric patterns across its surface.

As she approached, a panel lit up.

“Clara Avery identified. Welcome home.”

Her breath caught. Avery? Not Halden?

Inside, she found a living room filled with warmth. Real books, soft rugs, laughter from another room. She spotted a photograph on the wall—her father, smiling, next to a younger version of herself.

But this version of her wore different clothes. Different hair. A different life.

The Reunion That Couldn’t Stay

Footsteps. She turned.

There he was.

Older, tired, but alive.

Her father froze, eyes widening. “You’re not… her.”

“I’m from another world,” Clara said, tears building. “My father—you—disappeared. I found your watch. I followed it here.”

He stepped closer, slowly. “I tried to return,” he whispered. “But every time I did, you were gone. Or someone else was living your life. I… stayed here. Where I knew you would be safe.”

Clara nodded, tears falling. “You chose this version of me.”

He nodded. “She had a future. I couldn’t risk losing that again.”

They sat together in silence.

After a while, he reached into a drawer and pulled out a small silver key.

“Elias gave me this,” he said. “The return key. I never used it. I couldn’t. Maybe… it’s your turn now.”

Clara took the key. She stared at him, trying to memorize his face. “Goodbye,” she said softly.

“Goodbye, my girl,” he whispered.

Returning to the Present

The shop returned like a breath after drowning.

Elias was there, as if he’d never left.

She placed the watch and key on the counter.

“I found him,” she said. “But he wasn’t mine anymore.”

Elias nodded. “Few who chase the past return untouched.”

“What now?” Clara asked.

“You move forward,” he said. “But you carry the watch. For when the future asks questions the past couldn’t answer.”

She turned toward the door, the shop’s clocks ticking once more.

In her pocket, the watch ticked too—softly, steadily—marking not time, but every choice still waiting to be made.

About the Author

Shafi is a passionate fiction writer with a love for mysterious doorways, forgotten places, and stories that blur the line between reality and imagination. When not writing, he enjoys exploring the hidden corners of human emotion, crafting tales that leave readers wondering, "What if?"

His work often weaves together time, fate, and personal discovery—reminding us that even the smallest choice can echo across lifetimes.

Follow Shafi for more original short stories, alternate realities, and journeys beyond the ordinary.

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About the Creator

Echoes by Shafi--

Writer of quiet stories with loud endings.

Short fiction that lingers after the last line.

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