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The Abyssal Harbinger

Nyar's Revelation and the Vanquishing of the Nameless One

By Michael König-WeichhardtPublished 3 years ago 4 min read
Runner-Up in Tall Tail Challenge

As Nyar trod along the forsaken coast, it chanced upon a still lake, where collected ocean waters lay placid and glassy. And lo, in the tranquil surface it beheld its reflection, cast by the pallid light of the waning moon.

Nyar's raven-black fur, slick with the briny mist, gleamed with a lustrous sheen, as if wrought of some unearthly metal. Yet, it was the eyes, oh those eyes, that spoke of intelligence beyond that of any common feline.

For though Nyar was feline in form, its very soul was a conundrum, a mystery, a revelation beyond the ken of mortal men. It was a creature of unfathomable depth, a being of inscrutable intent, whose true nature lay shrouded in the darkness of aeons past.

"Since what dark epoch hath I wandered these accursed paths?" Nyar muttered unto himself, enshrouded in a cloak of uncertainty.

A strange sensation gripped Nyar's mind. A vision came unbidden and uncalled, a vision of the Nameless One, the dread master of the abyss. The very shape of Nyar's soul twisted and contorted in the image of this malevolent force, whose true name could not be spoken by human tongues.

As Nyar traversed the desolate wasteland, a faint glimmer of light caught its attention, far off in the distance. It was a flickering flame, dancing in the chill night breeze. Driven by an inexplicable curiosity and urgency, Nyar set off towards the source of the light.

As it drew closer, Nyar beheld the figure of a man, huddled by the fire's side. The man was clad in tattered robes and held a staff in his bony hands. Though his face was shrouded in shadow, Nyar could sense the palpable force of power that emanated from him.

The man looked up as Nyar approached, his eyes flashing with recognition. "Greetings, Nyar," he said, his voice ancient and wise. "I have been expecting you." Nyar was taken aback by the man's words. How could he have been expecting them? Nyar had no recollection of ever encountering this man before.

With caution, Nyar approached the fire and sat down opposite the man, its eyes fixed upon him. The man chuckled softly. "I see you are a creature of few words. That is to be expected, given your unique circumstances. But fear not, Nyar. I am here to guide you, to show you the way to your true purpose."

The man leaned forward, his eyes sparkling with a strange light. "Your purpose, Nyar, is to be the harbinger of change. To usher in a new era of existence, one that transcends the boundaries of the mundane and the ordinary. You are the key to unlocking the mysteries of the universe, the instrument through which the Nameless One shall be vanquished, and the light that shall guide us all to a brighter future."

Nyar's eyes widened in shock. This was a revelation beyond anything it had ever imagined. It had always known that it was different, that it possessed a power beyond mortal comprehension. But to hear it spoken aloud, to know that it had a destiny to fulfill, was both exhilarating and terrifying.

With gratitude in its heart, Nyar felt a surge of purpose coursing through its being. For the first time in its existence, it felt as though it had a reason to exist, a destiny to fulfill. And with that realization, Nyar knew that it was ready to face whatever lay ahead, for it was the chosen one, the harbinger of change, the key to unlocking the mysteries of the universe.

Nyar felt a surge of fear grip its heart, a fear that was unlike anything it had ever experienced before. The man's words were like a poison, infecting its mind with doubts and fears that threatened to consume it whole.

"You're lying," Nyar spat, its eyes narrowed in suspicion. "You're trying to manipulate me, to use me for your own twisted purposes."

The man's smile faded, replaced by a cold, steely gaze. "I assure you, Nyar, I have no such intentions. I seek only to guide you, to show you the path to greatness. But make no mistake, Nyar. You have a choice to make. You can either embrace your destiny and become the instrument of change, or you can continue to live your life as a mere shadow, forever bound by the limitations of your mortal form."

As the man's final words of fell from his lips, Nyar realized the extent of the manipulation that had been enacted upon him. His anger and fury boiled up inside him, and with a swift motion, he pushed the man over the cliff and into the raging ocean below.

Nyar stood at the edge of the cliff, his chest heaving with the exertion of his rage. The ocean roared and churned below him, and the wind whipped at his hair and clothes. For a moment, Nyar felt a sense of satisfaction at having rid himself of the manipulative human.

But then, Nyar's thoughts turned to his own fate. He had been manipulated, used for the human's own gain, and he had no idea what his true destiny was. Nyar's uncertainty and fear gnawed at him, and he realized that perhaps that was the nature of destiny itself – ever-changing and unknowable.

As Nyar gazed out at the tumultuous ocean, he wondered what lay ahead for him. Would he be doomed to a life of manipulation and servitude, or would he find a way to forge his own path? Nyar could not know, but he vowed to himself that he would never again allow himself to be manipulated as he had been by the human.

As Nyar basked in sated contentment and the ominous embrace of eternity, it became irrefutably evident that the accursed abomination which Nyar embodies shall forever languish in neglect by a world which deems its very existence an aberration. Its true name, unutterable by mortal tongues, shall remain forever shrouded in dark mystery.

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Michael König-Weichhardt

Michael König-Weichhardt is a master of macabre fantasy and sci-fi, weaving tales of unearthly creatures and arcane mysteries that defy comprehension.

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  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    This was a fascinating, mesmerizing and philosophical read (at least for me). Our shadows have such suspicious nature yet bears the keys to unlocking our true potential if approached correctly. Congratulations on placing in this challenge!

  • JBaz3 years ago

    Wow, such a mesmerizing tale. Congratulations

  • congrats love :)

  • Claudia Neaves3 years ago

    Really enjoyed reading this one! Made me curious if you could connect it to your "purple clouds" submission...would be a really cool saga!

  • Alice Freist3 years ago

    What a fun read! Your choice of words is exactly how I imagine a cat would use language. A little dramatic and a little verbose for everyday mere humans, but purrfectly catlike!

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    Your use of language is exquisite. Really, like watching a long ago saga of love, loss and betrayal. It's like reading non stop poetry.

  • Bryan Buffkin3 years ago

    Thank you for the kind words on my entry, as well as the invitation to check yours out. You certainly weave a tapestry with your descriptive word choice. Very poetic and beautifully crafted.

  • Brannan K.3 years ago

    I laughed when he shoved him off the cliff. Thinking, "Yes, that sounds feline all right, like knocking something off the table is what a cat would do." It also made me think of Nyan cat for some reason, and I thought we were about to have an origin story! Superb wordplay again, building that creeping, ominous feeling. I wonder what Nyar will do now. You really do excel in the dark fantasy world.

  • DJ Robbins3 years ago

    I love the rhythm of the words you choose to you write with. It paints such a complete picture and mood in few words. Very nice

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