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The 13th Door

Friday the 13th micro fan fiction

By Joe PattersonPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
The 13th Door
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There was only one rule: “don’t open the door.”

Alexis and Jackie are in their care on their way to the camp grounds of Crystal Lake when Alexis decides to stop at the infamous Voorhees house on the way there. “What are we doing here, Lex?” Jackie asked. “I just wanna see it” Alexis replied. “See what?” Jackie asked. “The Voorhees House” Alexis began. “This is the family home of Jason Voorhees”. “Wait, you mean the Crystal Lake killer?” Jackie asked with surprise.

“Yes” Alexis started. “Lex, come on, the boys are waiting for us” Jackie added. “Oh come on, Jackie. We can tell the boys we saw the house when we catch up to them.” The two girls got out of the car and walked to the front door of the house. “You know they say you’re not supposed to open this door when you visit this house because Jason is behind it and if you do he’ll pull you inside and cut you into pieces” Jackie asked.

“Well let’s give it a pull” Alexis joked as she turned the knob of the door. The door slowly opened to a darkened space, seemingly revealing nothing. “Well looks like there’s no-” before a Alexis could finish her stomach was suddenly pierced by a machete. “AHHH!” Jackie screamed as Alexis hunched over and gasped.

As a bleeding Alexis collapsed on the porch of the house, a horrified Jackie tried to run away but was quickly grabbed by an arm attached to a man wearing a hockey mask. The man picked up the struggling Jackie and took her into the house as she kicked and screamed. Jackie’s screams could be heard as Alexis lay dying in front of the door.

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Joe Patterson

Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.

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  • Just Danielabout a year ago

    Very well-written and excellent short! Very good dialogue between the two (short-lived) characters!

  • 😱😱 scary af

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    👀 Sccccaary!

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Ouch...Movie people never listen, apparently real life ones too. chilling Joe.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Whoa. Not a pleasant encounter!! Great story, Joe.

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