Tales of Way Back When
Monday 21st October, Story #295/366
Someone said hell is other people. We were convinced of it, back then. Or something only a breath away: other people are poison. Their touch could make you deathly ill; their breath could kill you.
Every day, the death toll was beamed into our homes. Wasn't even "mandatory viewing", like in some futuristic dystopian novel. People are morbid. They love a good death toll. It's juicy. Folks like being scared. That's why they tell each other ghost stories, ride rollercoasters, and watch horror films.
Just because you seek out being scared for whatever reason, (maybe your parents bubble-wrapped you too much as a kid; maybe the local council took away the monkey bars because of Health and Safety) doesn't mean it's always good for you. It hobbles your brain, the way a cowboy hobbles his horse.
Wouldn't want your mind running round willy-nilly, now would we? Thinking. Getting into all sorts of bother.
Frightened people are stupid, like panicked animals. They're already cowed, and obedience follows, sure as thunder follows lightning, or a smell follows a fart. They're like to do as they are told. They'll bite their flockmates, too, like as not. They all think they're Mr Schindler, but the truth is, they'd relish the idea of shopping a neighbour for Not Following The Rules.
So: we put our heads down, and we stayed indoors. Our physical health suffered, our waistlines expanded, our minds rotted. We avoided each other, and let's face it, some of us were glad of the excuse to do that because other people can be infuriating. But people need people, like them or not. The human is a social beast.
If we did venture out, we gave others a wide berth, and covered our faces. We scrubbed our groceries before we took them indoors. Babies were born and lived for months without seeing the smiles of strangers. We waved at each other through screens and pretended this was enough, while pre-schoolers fell further behind with social skills, and rickets made a comeback. Businesses closed forever. People lost their jobs.
The arrows faded on the supermarket floors. Many didn't want to admit how toxic it all was. Truth is, we're still healing.
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Word count: 366
(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's note.)
Submitted on Monday 21st October at 20:47
Quick Author's Note
A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This continues my 295 daily micro-fiction story streak since 1st January. I'm nearly at 300!!
ONLY SEVENTY-ONE DAYS TO GO!
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Comments (14)
“Hell is other people.” Jean-Paul Sartre....Such a great premise for your story. You are so right in that we are still healing from the emotional and physical toil of such a pivotal period in our lives. This was such an emphatic and well-written piece. Very thought provoking.
I'm not even sure how to comment on the craziness of that time, many would consider my views no less crazy so I don't air them in public too often. So let me just say that I changed countries just a few months before it all started and had some trouble discerning what was normal for the folk around me and what wasn't. One thing that struck me was how everyone seemed to believe in and adhere to what they were told on TV... Wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen it.
A lot of truth in this.
Reality in microfiction. Yep, still healing.
Thunder follows lightning is too mainstream so I love how you followed it up with smell following a fart! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
This is a really impressive essay, LC! I hope it’s recognized on the platform!
To echo the others, it was crazy here too, and if we want to be scared even further, slightly apocolyptic. Packed hospitals and all that. But the virus has subsided, and there is hope, only if we are careful. A great descrptive, LC.
It was a crazy time for sure. My youngest daughter had medical issues and when I called the hospital to find out when I could visit I was told you can't. My wife and I have never caught COVID and we didn't inject ourselves with bleach, but it must have been tough for those that did catch it.
You absolutely nailed it. It's hard to believe the 'covid years' weren't that long ago, but it already feels like decades, but five minutes ago at the same time. I can't believe how meekly we all followed the rules. I am not sure I could face another lockdown. You're spot on - we're still healing.
You speak the truth. We are still healing. thank you for sharing this.
There is so much Truth to this. The hardest part for me is the "Screen" aspect. I'm a big fan of Remote Work, but it has to do with other aspects of Psychophysiology in today's workforce. But even with that, we still need to be Human, and not forever isolated in Cages we call houses like Zoo Animals. There is more to Living. This feels like it could be the start of some form of Dystopian series!
Truth is, we're still healing is the truest truth of all.
Weird times, looking back at what some thought was rihgt while others fought tooth and nail.
Oh, so sad, and oh, so true. I may have mentioned this before, but I had emergency open heart surgery right in the big, fat middle of the lockdown. There's nothing quite so eerie as being wheeled through an empty hospital! Great story, L.C!