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Summer's Rain 🌧️

The Summer that wasn't.

By Novel AllenPublished 6 months ago β€’ Updated 6 months ago β€’ 3 min read
Top Story - July 2025

Ziv was eight years old. He had always loved the rain. When the Summer sun heated his skin to melting and the sky turned a darker shade...he would escape when Momma was not looking and go jump in the puddles, his clothes drenched in the downpour.

She would quarrel, dry his hair vigorously and make hot chocolate. He sure was happy then.

But the next summer she had become ill. And five summers later she bade them goodbye and was laid in the ground.

Now summers are not summers anymore. Ziv was now thirteen, he had dreaded summers for five years. His Daddy tried his best to be brave and encourage his son to be brave also.

Still. Ziv no longer jumped in puddles or walked in the rain. He thought it cruel and blamed it for taking his mother. One day she had played with him in the rain, then she got sick...Ziv thought it was his fault. But the rain had nothing to do with her illness, it was no one's fault...it just happened...as things will often go in the way of this world.

His therapist said the rain would heal him...he should seek his salvation in the healing waters from the sky...maybe in that place, he would meet his mother in between the drops, jump in puddles and dance with her once more.

Salvation. He looked up the meaning of the word. A source or means of being saved from harm, ruin or loss. Well, he needed to be saved for sure, Ziv was tired of being sad for such a long time.

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Thirteen year old Ziv decided to take his therapist's advice. This summer would not be the one he wanted...but it would have to do.

He walked out into the rain...imagining himself eight years old again. He bent down, touched his finger to the puddle...and a strange feeling overcame him. Like an electric charge awakening the past...where he was happy, alive with youth and laughing again.

It was as if the molecules of his body (he loved biology) reacted to the water and it to him. It transported him back to when he was in that happy place again.

He glanced up...and there was his mother, jumping in the puddle, her flowery umbrella held aloft. He was glad that she had the umbrella. Her head would be protected this time. It would maybe keep her from becoming ill again.

"Come my son. jump with me". His mother laughed happily, calling out to his father who walked by, his spirit seeming low.

Father, startled, could not believe what he was seeing. He rubbed his eyes...squinted...and cried a little.

Then he joined his son in what he thought was just a dream.

Oh, how cheerful was that summer evening. His mother had returned, just for one moment to let them know that she was happy...and that they should let go and be happy too.

Summers were not sad anymore. That day changed their lives and brought back happy continuations. The Summer rain now carries that delicious blend of warmth and melancholy, like the sky remembering how to cry gently.

Lovely, evocative memories soaked in imagination.

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Rain now drips through the pages of their memories.

The past resurfaces with warm droplets and umbrellas bloom like slow-moving flowers under the storm’s breath.

A rainy cityscape becomes a dreamscape filled with sentient shelter and wonder-filled tales.

"We never knew happiness until the summer rain spoke". Ziv wrote in his poetry class.

"Contemplative...rain isn’t just a sound, but the absence of everything else". His teacher replied approvingly.

Now Ziv runs barefoot on wet pathways, dancing with the ghosts of all his mother's remembered moments.

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Summer now opens like umbrellas of jasmine on rainy nights.

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Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Leya kirsan official 5 months ago

    Congratulation πŸ•΅οΈβ€β™‚οΈβ™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  • congratulations on this work being recognized... your imagery and the magic of rain was beautiful and healing to your character and the reader!

  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    What?! I can't believe it. She's... πŸ₯Ί It's very unsettling how things just... Happened. Makes me want to hide somewhere. But even there, things will also happen. Poor Ziv. I like the depth you brought in. The waters of the sky leading to the way he would heal. It warms my heart that her head would be protected now. Even after she departed. This line was perfect, 'rain now drips through the pages of their memories'. This whole ordeal, even gave him something to write in his poetry class. Maybe it isn't all bad afterall. Congratulations on your leaderboard placement Allen πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Congrats πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Imola TΓ³th6 months ago

    Congrats on your TS! πŸŽ‰ I'm glad I found it in the newsletter.

  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    So gorgeous, hopeful and uplifting. The prose that you utilized for this piece was perfect! πŸ₯° This was a wonderful lesson on perspective! You flame-broiled this piece No! Thx for gently feeding our souls with your wisdom often! Get it gurl! πŸ’ͺπŸΎπŸ«ΆπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸŒŸβ˜ΊοΈ Congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸŒΈ

  • Marie381Uk 6 months ago

    Fabulous ♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Antoni De'Leon6 months ago

    What a sweet rainy day story, rain always brings promise and newness. Kudos on TS.

  • Mary Haynes6 months ago

    Beautiful! I definitely had the feels. I have many rain memories, it is a wonder.

  • Andrea Corwin 6 months ago

    A Rainy cityscape becomes a dream scape… 😍 Congratulations on the top story, my friend! πŸ’•πŸ‘

  • ElaheMindStories6 months ago

    That was a heartwarming story.

  • Carol Ann Townend6 months ago

    That is beautiful. I loved reading it. Flowers such as Jasmine always remind me of people I have loved and lost.

  • Israr khan6 months ago

    Please support me i am very poor

  • Afghan Writer6 months ago

    Good story

  • Asad Ullah khan 6 months ago

    Stunning

  • So glad Ziv and his father are now happy again. Congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • JBaz6 months ago

    Wow do I like that last line Congratulations on TS

  • Sandor Szabo6 months ago

    This is absolutely lovely! I particularly liked the way you wrote about Ziv's reluctance to take his therapist's advice. I have to admit I also got a little teary eyed when he looked up to see his mother. I firmly believe that we keep people alive through our memories and traditions. Your story was wonderful, thank you for sharing it!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby6 months ago

    Stunning work

  • Julie Lacksonen6 months ago

    Love this!! The imagery is beautiful and memorable. You do have one word below the flower umbrella pic that needs editing. I believe "ad" was meant to be "and." If I'm wrong, I apologize. I found something I wanted to change in one of mine, but it was too late because they had closed it for review, so I'm trying to be helpful.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji6 months ago

    I expected a tear jerker, but this was very wholesome and hopeful

  • Sean A.6 months ago

    Beautiful, a lovely way to wring happiness from rain

  • That was a heartwarming story. I love the moral and message of the story.

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