Snowtime
A Story Every Day in 2024 Dec 14th ?/366
"You can't just stop! You have a deadline to meet!"
Susan knew the truth of what Arthur was saying but she thought Damn it! and walked out anyway. Arthur had been insufferable for days, pushing her and pushing her and she'd had enough.
She left the house, entered the cool, winter air. It was starting to get dark, light retreating behind the houses. Snow started to fall and she looked at the scene around her. Calming, serene, timeless.
She hoped Arthur wouldn't follow her. She just wanted to be, just for a while.
The book would just have to wait.
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100 words
If I said, I didn't relate to this, I'd be lying. It's dark, I've just set up my Christmas village and realised that I've not written my story today. Thought I'd better get to it. Wouldn't want to fall before these final few hurdles.
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Comments (16)
Thank you for sharing! Wonderful story
Wonderful little story, packed into so few words.
Wonderful as always, Rachel! So close to the finish line!
I love the scene you painted!! There's just something about the snow at night, with lights twinkling all around!! I love this season and your microfiction too!! Great work Rachel!!
Beautifully done Rachel, a heartfelt story conveying a valuable lesson.💕 You can do it, and you're almost through the challenge!😊✨
Not surprised you may be needing a break! I’m curious about your ‘ Christmas village’ you’ve set up 😃🧐.
Taking a break is always beneficial. Loved your story!
Good on you Rachel. I can’t believe you’ve written such consistently brilliant stories all year.
Ah, so now the stories are writing you!
It can be so easy to forget this time of year. being busy. so glad you remembered in time.
I never keep a book waiting . I am so glad you are keeping up with your writing goals. You go girl
Distractions can be a pain, but I think they help sometimes.
The last days of the challenge are always so hard, Rachel. But just a little over two weeks and you'll be there! I'm so impressed you have been able to keep up with it.
In such few words you've managed to create a setting of peace and tranquility. Great writing, Rachel.
Taking a break from your inner Arthur? What amazes me is the consistent quality of your output, Rachel! Really impressive focus for a veritable writing marathon!
Not long to go now! Are you going to miss all the slog next year, I wonder?