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Ryan's Dream

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By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Ryan's Dream
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"Don't you dare say you love me" – Danni retorted inconsolably. They had been arguing for hours that morning.

"What do you want me to say? That's how I feel" Ryan reasoned.

"Sure, sure...and I was a-born yesterday to pig that can-a fly" she cried, her Spanish accent more prominent.

"How do you explain this?" she questioned, tapping her phone, and playing audio.

"oh baby...oh baby...yes, right there...that's it!"

"who is baby, Ryan? Who is she?"

"I was asleep, Danni! Next to you! It was a dream!" he laughed.

"Well, enjoy dream Danni on the couch tonight!”

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!

Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!

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  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    Ha! Nicely done! This was just a snippet of their argument, to be sure, but I can hear the backs and forths now... Danni just needs to get over it, lol. I wonder if they'll last?

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Damn, those dreams be getting us in trouble 😅 Loved it!

  • I like his dream life better than my own.

  • Lol, this was hilarious! Poor Ryan!

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