Requiem's Prelude
Epic Beginnings Challenge Entry.

The worlds of super 'heroes' and 'villains' has been saturated with cliches and tropes that those with abilities feel pressured to follow and adhere to. Not I. My powers were borne from one singular act of senseless and brutal violence. As I lay on the urine-flooded floor of my toilet cubical deathbed, blood pooling from my mouth and several other gaping wounds, mixing with the brown, green and yellow creating a Pollack-esque artwork beneath my broken body, I felt nothing and everything. All at once.
Pity? no. Hatred. Not for the loose-jawed yokels that dished out my final pasting. For the society of ignorance and pacifism, that favours turning a blind eye because facing up to problems and making the ugly decisions is too hard to bear. As life slowly petered out of me, I found myself wasting those final seconds of mortality, planning out my solution to society.
Then I blacked out.
Like all those times when our best ideas are born just as sleep captures us, I drifted away. I have no idea what happened next. Not really. The liminal black abyss seemed to last for both a nanosecond and several millennia. I am not even sure I survived. But, as I dropped the last, garrotted redneck piece of crap on the pile of flesh, bones and entrails that once resembled people, walked into the bar and sank a skinful of vodka, I felt a strange power coursing through me. Like my veins were on fire, my blood replaced by something more venomous and caustic. My body restless and inflamed, fighting this infection. I caught my reflection in a mirror. I didn’t look any different. But I was different. Something had awakened in me and a renewed sense of real justice and vengeance roared.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (10)
Such strong scene writing!! Felt like a dark and gritty origin story
Great entry, Paul! Fabulously gritty!
Your cover pic was sooooo delicious, it make me lick my lips hehehehehehe. Loved your story! 🍩🥐
Paul I love the intensity and vivid imagery of this piece!! So gripping and left me wanting more, in the best way!! Great work!
Intense, good, but very very intense
The image and the story both are very dark and villainous. Perfect tone for this. One of the grittiest things I've read!
A totally disgusting image you chose but it shows what the story is about. The hatefulness of society and how does anyone really help any of us are there really superheroes and villain? Great work.
Terrifyingly brilliant!! What could have created such a monster..? I love philosophical musing on heroes/villains at the beginning, which transitions perfectly into the gritty picture painted by the rest of the story. Bravo, Paul!
Ooh, that's dark. Someone really pissed him off, but seems like he got his revenge. Also, that pic is amazing. Well done.
Jeepers! That was a dip into the darkness! Villainous indeed and that artwork? Eek!