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Pressing

Tuesday 14th January 2025, Story #380

By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Pressing
Photo by Quin Stevenson on Unsplash

My eyelids unshutter, and in the same instant, I know something is wrong. It's as if the earth has tilted on her axis; my room looks the way it always does except there is something... Something off. Something indefinable.

I make to roll over and find a more comfortable position but (this is it) I cannot move. The instant I realise this, I'm aware of weight pressing on my chest.

They say pressing is more horrible than hanging, and I believe it. This is the stuff of nightmares and worse. Being crushed, slowly at first, giving you time to relish what is to come in horrifying detail.

Each breath has become a struggle. Only my eyes can move, and I move them a lot, as if those tiny muscles around my eyeballs are doing all the running my legs want to do. As if I could somehow move by sheer effort, caterpillar myself along just by frantically moving my eyes.

Then... I saw her. She was probably about seven years old, and she looked out of place in my room because of her very old-fashioned clothes. The dusty-blue smock screams ghost. Her hair is long and straight, and her eyes are wide and empty. She is carrying a well-loved, vintage-looking teddy bear under one arm. The whole picture whispers doesn't belong here. She smiles a small smile.

Panic thrums through me, building to a tidal wave the wider those with rosy-pink lips stretch. I still couldn't move. I couldn't scream either.

The pressure on my chest intensified with each step she took. This only increases my terror. I drag in a rasping breath, and another. And another. She reached the edge of the bed and sat down, her presence amplifying the dread that gripped me.

The sensation of my chest being squeezed becomes unbearable. My gasps for air become feeble croaks, my vision blurs. Her stare bores into me. The room closes in around me, the weight of her gaze suffocates...

When next my eyes open, light is peeping through the curtains. She is gone, and my lungs expand freely in a sweet sigh of relief.

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  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    I felt like I read this story before about a little girl ghost who hunts .

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Yeah, this brings back some not-so-pleasant memories of dreams.

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! This fictional account isn't so far removed from many people's real-life accounts of sleep paralysis... ...there, made it creepier for ya!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh my, what a nightmare!

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    So he couldn’t move because he was scared? (I think I understand but lately my brain doesn’t always absorb everything… I hate getting old!) anyway, wonderful story! I love the fear! I’ve had a few terrifying nightmares myself, so I get it! Fantastically written!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    This was fab. You really built up those feelings of terror and dread so well. I hate nightmares that follow you into the daytime.

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Intense! Making me hold my own breath

  • Mother Combsabout a year ago

    Heck of a night terror

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