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Myth or murder. The White Witch of Rosehall, a legendary Jamaican ghost.

Serving it up Caribbean Style, welcome to Montego Bay. A Novel and Antoni Collaboration.

By Antoni De'LeonPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 9 min read
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"Come get you coconut water here, remember it good for you daughter, and also for you ". Rasta yelled out, grinning feistily as tourists and islanders alike stopped by his stall to quench their thirst.

The sun cast a golden glow over the pristine sands of Montego Bay, painting a picture of tranquility and delight. Families and friends sprawled across colorful beach towels, their laughter mingled with the calls of seagulls overhead, happy children built sandcastles with intricate bits of this and that for turrets and moats, their creations glittering under the bright Caribbean sun. Nearby, a game of beach volleyball erupted in playful cheers, the ball arcing high against the blue sky.

If you listen carefully, through all the cacophony of sounds, you can hear the gentle waves lap at the shore, their rhythmic sound providing a soothing backdrop to the day. Palm trees swayed lazily in the breeze, their shadows offering cool respite to those seeking shelter from the sun’s generous and zealous rays.

By Claudia Altamimi on Unsplash

Reggae music played to the aroma of freshly grilled seafood wafting from a nearby beachside shack, tempting passersby with the promise of a delicious meal. Vendors strolled along the shore, their baskets brimming with tropical fruits and freshly cracked ice-cold coconuts, sipped straight from the shell as a refreshing treat, its sweetness a perfect antidote to the heat. Couples strolled hand-in-hand along the water’s edge, a trail of footprints in the wet sand, fleeting evidence of secrets shared only by them.

Far overhead, the sun sparkled off the turquoise waters, inviting swimmers and snorkelers to explore the vibrant marine life below the surface. Paddleboarders and kayakers glided gracefully across the bay, their movements in harmony with the gentle currents.

...

Nearby, six friends sat eyeing the crowded beach and a large poster lodged betwixt swaying palms. Grinning still figures of islanders beckoned with outstretched and inviting hands, women and men dressed in the red, yellow, green, white and black colors of the Jamaican national costumes. "Come visit the Rose Hall Great house, meet the ghost of Annie Palmer in person"! The words tempted.

"Everyone knows the Jamaican legend of Annie Palmer, the White witch of Rose Hall". Rosa giggled as they all sat under the coconut tree sipping the succulent juice. With wide-eyed wonder they watched, amused and impressed as the vendor deftly hacked off the tops of the large green nuts with his machete.

"Obviously not everyone, at least you have Jamaican roots, so your parents would have told you about it". Markus argued. Except for Rosa and Javed, this was their first trip to the island. This was also their first vacation together after graduating college.

"Can you imagine us capturing the ghost and a bit of the history on camera. Picture Annie...she stands at her window reminiscing on her deeds, watching as six ill-advised young ghostbusters try to sneak into the plantation on a moonless or moonlit night. I will take either one". Juan was imagining his YouTube channel going viral. Everyone loved a good ghost story.

"Why don't we sneak in tonight after all the tours are over, my Auntie Emeline works there and I can borrow her keys, without her knowing, of course". Rosa offered.

"No freaking way", Quinivere grumbled, "I am not visiting any ghosts at night".

"Oh come on, sounds like so much fun, something dangerous for a change, it would be great". Javed pleaded.

"I'm in". Jimie offered, and just like that it was decided, they would all go ghost hunting.

...

In the distance, the lush green hills framed the idyllic scene, a reminder of the natural beauty that surrounded this paradise. As the day slowly turned to evening, the sky began to blush with hues of pink and orange, casting a magical light over the beachgoers who basked in the last rays and warmth of the serenity of ocean life in Montego Bay

Juan's imagination had already taken flight. He would write a modern version of four young men, Juan, Javed, Markus and Jimie, along with Rosa and Quinivere, as unaware, they cautiously approach the house, his camera at the ready.

Chapter two

"The Legend of Annie Palmer, the White Witch of Rose Hall". The video began...

"Annie Palmer, known as the White Witch, was once a powerful and feared mistress of the Rose Hall plantation in Montego Bay, Jamaica. Born in Haiti to an English mother and Irish father, Annie was orphaned at a young age and raised by a nanny who taught her voodoo. She moved to Jamaica and married John Palmer, the owner of Rose Hall, who mysteriously died shortly after. It was rumored that Annie murdered him, along with her subsequent husbands and numerous lovers. Her cruelty extended to the enslaved people on the plantation, whom she tormented and killed for sport.

The legend says that Annie's spirit still haunts the mansion, standing at her window, watching over the land she once ruled with an iron fist.

The impressive Rose Hall plantation and its environs

The plantation, located in Montego Bay, Jamaica, is one of the most famous and infamous landmarks in the Caribbean. It is known for its stunning Georgian architecture, characterized by symmetry, proportion, and balance. The mansion, sits on a hill overlooking the turquoise waters of the Caribbean Sea, offering panoramic views.

The estate originally spanned over 6,600 acres, comprising sugarcane fields, a sugar mill, and various outbuildings essential for plantation life. The lush landscape and strategic location made Rose Hall a prominent symbol of wealth and power during Jamaica’s colonial era.

By Aime Medard Niyokwizerwa on Unsplash

The house itself is a three-level structure with fine mahogany paneling, marble floors, and grand staircases. The main living quarters are on the second floor, featuring high ceilings, spacious rooms, and elegant furnishings that reflect the opulence of the era.

Rose Hall is shrouded in dark legends and ghost stories, most notably the tale of Annie Palmer, the "White Witch of Rose Hall," who was rumored to practice voodoo and commit heinous acts on the plantation.

Today, the estate includes a championship golf course, hotel, and high-end real estate, making it a popular destination for visitors seeking both history and luxury.

Chapter three

A Modern Tale: A clandestine visit to The Ghosts of history.

Midnight approached under a moonless sky. In the eerie silence, Rose Hall stood as a foreboding silhouette against the dark backdrop of the heavenly firmament. Within its walls, the spirit of Annie Palmer watched from her window, her ghostly visage illuminated by the faint glow of forgotten candlelight. She remembered her deeds—her power, her cruelty, her countless victims—as she gazed out into the night.

"Annie, Annie...no more! An ethereal voice cried out.

Turning around, Annie saw her murderer, Takoo, a devilishly handsome slave whom she had tried to lure to his doom, but had himself strangled her quite dead. Now in this afterlife stage however, he was powerless to stop her.

...

Outside, four young men—Juan, Javed, Markus, and Jimie—huddled together, their flashlights cutting through the darkness. With them were Rosa and Quinevere, their giggles betraying a mix of excitement and trepidation. They had heard the stories, of course. They'd read about the White Witch and the haunted halls. But on this night, curiosity and thrill-seeking had drawn them to the plantation, despite their better judgment.

"Do you think it's true?" Quinevere whispered, her breath visible in the cold night air.

Juan shrugged, his eyes scanning the tree line. "I don't know, but we're about to find out."

...

The group moved cautiously, the crunch of gravel underfoot the only sound in the stillness. As they neared the house, the atmosphere grew heavier, as if the very air were charged with the weight of history and unspoken horrors.

"Maybe this isn't such a good idea," Markus muttered, his voice betraying his nerves.

Rosa nudged him playfully. "Don't chicken out now. We're almost there."

Across the vast expanse of what had once been the cotton and sugar fields, a chilling moan of a thousand phantom voices rose softly, horrifying and hauntingly omen-like, stopping the six in their tracks.

"What is that"? poor Quinivere wailed under her breath, trembling as she clutched tightly to Jimie's hand.

"It's only the wind, Quin'. He muttered, squeezing her hand, but the slight quiver in his voice belied his confidence.

...

They reached the grand entrance, its doors closed as if to keep the world at bay. Annie's spirit watched with cold, lifeless eyes, her presence felt but unseen.

The doors creaked open, and the group stepped inside. The interior of Rose Hall was as grand as it was ominous, with portraits and relics of a bygone era lining the walls and lifelike statues poised to reach out and touch you. The unearthly cold, which seemed strangely out of place, began to seep into their bones, as the flickering of their flashlights cast unsettling shadows upon the walls.

"Guys, look," Jimie said, pointing to a portrait of Annie Palmer. Her eyes seemed to follow them, her expression one of malevolent amusement.

"Whose picture is that hanging on the other wall, it looks strangely out of place in here". Rosa was confused as she walked over to read the inscription below the sad Black woman on the wall. She had been to Rose Hall many times, but had never seen this portrait before.

The real Mrs. Annie Palmer, was the Jamaican-born wife of the Custos of St. James, and daughter of Dr. Paterson, Custos of Hanover, and his wife. Neither of her two husbands died of murder, and she was not murdered.

"Then whose ghost is in this house". Rosa wondered out loud, looking up at the picture once again.

"RUN"! Rosa heard quite clearly, stumbling back.

"RUN"!

Rosa ran, colliding with Markus as she tried to explain that the woman in the picture had talked to her, but no one was really paying attention, all were so caught up in the moment. Rosa looked back at the silent woman, shrugging it all off as nerves as she stayed close to the group.

As they explored the mansion, the giggles and whispers grew quieter, replaced by an uneasy silence. Every creak of the floorboards, every rustle of the wind seemed magnified, as if the house itself were alive and watching.

Annie's spirit moved through the halls, her presence felt but never seen. She watched these intruders, these curious souls who dared to tread on her domain. Her legacy of fear and death was far from over, and she reveled in their growing unease.

Outside, the wind howled through the trees, and the darkness deepened. The young people continued their exploration, unaware that they were not alone, that the White Witch of Rose Hall was with them every step of the way.

...

The young explorers' excitement quickly turned to terror as the air within Rose Hall grew thick and oppressive. A chill ran down their spines as the very walls seemed to close in on them. Suddenly, the world around them shifted, the modern-day fixtures fading into the opulence and dread of Annie Palmer's era. They found themselves in the heart of the 19th century, the grand mansion as well as their personas restored to the former glory of the past—and its former menace.

Annie's spirit materialized before them, her eyes cold and unforgiving. With a flick of her wrist, the doors slammed shut, trapping the intruders within her domain. Panic set in, their screams echoing through the haunted halls, but there was no escape. Annie moved with an ethereal grace, her malevolent intent clear.

One by one, she cornered them, her ghostly fingers like icy chains. Their pleas for mercy went unheard as Annie exacted her vengeance, relishing in their terror. The mansion absorbed their cries, their struggles futile against the supernatural force that held them captive.

When the darkness finally consumed them, Rose Hall fell silent once more. Annie's spirit, satisfied, retreated to her eternal watch at the window.

Chapter five

Days later, when visitors returned to the plantation, they were met with an unexplainable sight. In the garden, six statues stood, eerily lifelike and dressed in the attire of Annie Palmer's time. Juan, Javed, Markus, Jimie, Rosa, and Quinevere had been transformed, their features preserved in stone, forever part of the mansion's haunting legacy.

Surrounded by blooming flowers under the Caribbean sun, the statues stood as a chilling reminder of the White Witch's wrath and the fate of those who dared to disturb her slumber.

If one chooses to look deeper into the vine-covered depths of the plantation, there they would find similar models of those gone before, as they too stood regally in statuesque pose of another era gone by.

Peer even closer, and there are cameras depicting changing times, all poised in the hand of one or the other of the still, lifelike marble forms.

The garden, though beautiful, carried an air of sorrow and fear, a vivid reminder of the enduring power of the legend of Rose Hall.

...

The Ballad of Annie Palmer - A Jamaican Witch.

AdventureFableHistoricalHorrorMysteryStream of ConsciousnessPsychological

About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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  • Novel Allen12 months ago

    🤗❤️💕🤣😍

  • Tiffany Gordon12 months ago

    You two slam-dunked this piece! 💪🏾 What an eerie, beautifully-written, thriller that you've both crafted. It read like a movie. I enjoyed the setting and the twists and turns that arose throughout the story! Superb job you two! BRAVA! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • 365poetry12 months ago

    Great job, I actually think the myth exists! Great photographs as well!

  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    This was quite a fun read. Good job.

  • Komal12 months ago

    This was a wickedly fun tale! A mix of history, horror, and high jinks. The eerie twist of modern explorers meeting their fate with a side of ghostly vengeance was a perfect touch. Loved the vibe of chilling suspense and cheeky thrills!

  • verse voyager12 months ago

    This story has such a cool mix of history and mystery! The group’s excitement really contrasts with the creepy vibe of Rose Hall. The twist at the end, with them becoming part of the legend, is super chilling! Great job!

  • Tales by J.J.12 months ago

    The detailed descriptions and the suspenseful storyline keep the reader hooked, making them eager to find out what happens next. Well done

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