Meltwater
Telltale crimson trail: part 3
Leaning against the patrol car, I drew deep from the Sonoma, watching CSIs fuss around the hastily-erected tent. They had tried, in vain, to get it up before the now heavy rain had washed away much of the forensics.
My unmarked car was parked further back, ready to take me and the rest of the evidence away. I threw down the cigarette, already extinguished and wet.
“Another gang killing, they’re saying,” said the patrolman whose squad car I was leaning against.
“I wouldn’t want to speculate,” I said dismissively, before walking away.
“We’ll need your clothing for evidence, lieutenant,” said a white-suited figure, indicating the crime-scene vehicle where he wanted me to change. If they’d thought about it sooner, before the rain had soaked me to the skin, they could have preserved a little more of their evidence. Then again, most had been removed when I'd ‘stumbled’ earlier in deep snow.
Having changed, and given my statement to an unknown young detective, I headed back to my car. Stevie was leaning into her own vehicle, stretching the radio cord to her ear, her eyes still ranging over the scene.
As I watched her in the rear view, she turned. I pulled the car away from the kerb. She ran after me, gesticulating wildly, dropping the handset. I continued at a relaxed pace, but not relaxed enough for her to catch up. She was the only one smart enough.
She’d send a patrol car to my home. They’d have to wait.
What will the patrol car officers find? And why would they have to wait?
Find out in part four: Chain of evidence
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Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.
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Comments (11)
Dexter would find enough to convict, though he probably wouldn't tell anyone. He does like taking care of such matters himself, lol.
Hmm. I worry about Stevie. Sometimes too smart isn’t good!! This is a fab series!
I'm gripped. Part Four - here I come!
Getting closer to the end.
Oh no, she's on to him! I hope he can get away with it! Hehehehehhe. Waiting for part 4!
Well-written character. Great work!
Keeping readers on tenterhooks over here! Looks like someone could be clever enough to put the pieces together 👀
I’m with LC on this one, Ray. This has all the makings of a pulse pounding thriller! I’m glad you decided to continue this story post snow micro challenge and look forward to reading more!
She is the only one smart enough?! I feel like maybe not…who is this young detective? I sense he will return! Damn this is so good! So excited for more!
Ooooh I am all over this! I can't wait for part 4!
Brilliantly creative and fantastic entry! Enjoyed this a lot! 🤍