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Medusa Rises --Again

Short Fiction for the Legends Rewritten Challenge

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 5 min read
Medusa Rises --Again
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The strongest are those who lift others. -Michelle Liew

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Medusa wasn't always about stony serpents and petrifying gazes --she had once possessed an intellect sharper than the town could keep up with, and an even sharper tongue. Her brilliance was unparalleled --a mind that flickered dangerously in a place that preferred dimmer lights.

She was the daughter of a small town where everyone knew each other, and reputation was prime property, traded like stocks over picket fences and after church services. Few cars combed the narrow, dusty roads, and the constant hum of gossip was as steady as summer rain. It was a place where conformity was currency, and Medusa was bankrupt.

The town couldn't deal with someone like her --she asked too many questions, challenged too many norms. And when they couldn't understand, they did what they did -judge, ridicule and try to break her.

Medusa's family didn't have a white picket fence. Her clothes? Thrift-store finds. But her oversized dreams were too big for the town's undersized streets. They spilled out like food from an overfilled plate, too much to ignore. Though the town tried to dim her, she burned brighter because of it.

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One fateful night, everything changed for the embattled, yet resilient Medusa as she walked home from her part-time job at a local diner. A group of drunken disorderlies, their breaths reeking of rancid alcohol, approached her. Their loud catcalls and stumbling strides barely masked their intentions.

Among them was a celebrity athlete, the town's untouhable golden boy. He grabbed her arm and uttered a profanity in her ear that made her blood run cold. Medusa, steadfast and unyielding, jerked away. Their response? Laughter. Jeering. Merciless.

"Relax, sweetheart. You should be flattered."

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The constant badgering would break the most resilient soul, and Medusa finally snapped. She was walking briskly home through the town square when a group of troublemaking teens started hassling her. "Hey Medusa!" one of them taunted, a sneer twisting his face. "Why don't you turn us to stone with that ugly face of yours?"

The deep-seated fury, long-smothered, finally surfaced. She turned and faced them squarely, her eyes blazing with anger they had never seen. "You want a monster? You want stone?" she spat. "Fine. That's what I'll show you."

Then, the air around her thickened --something unnatural. Something bristled with power. The youths froze. Literally. Their bodies became rigid, and their faces contorted in terror. Immobilized within seconds, their skins took on a grayish, stone-like texture, and their bodies stiffened into grotesque statues. Medusa felt her breath coming in ragged gasps. She had turned into what she feared most, but for the first time, she was truly --herself.

She had finally come into her own power.

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Medusa walked into the town square, her head held high. Whispers trailed after her like shadows, but this time, they couldn't touch her. She didn't flinch. She stopped at the center of the square and faced a growing crowd, expressions locked in silent terror.

"You MAY silence me," she roared, her voice ricocheting off the facades of the surrounding buildings. "Go ahead -but know this. You will remember me."

Her eyes burned with otherworldly fury, and the air around her hummed with power. The crowd stepped back, almost in unison, as her hair writhed and twisted, transforming into a nest of snakes. Her gaze locked on the mayor, the embodiment of the power that sought to break her.

"You called me a monster." Her voice was low and dangerous. "Now meet her."

The mayor stood frozen -stone. One by one, the others in the crowd followed, their faces frozen in shock. Medusa stood amidst them, her breath ragged, her heart pounding with the overwhelming weight of her power. She had embraced her power, becoming their worst fear -and maybe, her own.

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Medusa left the backwater town behind, retreating to a remote cabin in mountains. The silence there soothed her, as if the mountains there were wrapping her in peace. It was a stark contrast to the cacaphony of judgement she had left behind. She spent her days revelling in art and sculpture, no longer constrained by the town's expectations. But in the quiet, the weight of what she'd done lingered, as though the stones she had turned others into had lodged themselves in her heart. Her creations, though balm for her mind, were stark reminders of what she was capable of.

She found herself gazing at her creations, all lifeless, beauty frozen in time. She recalled the mayor and his followers turning to stone as they fell under her sharp gaze. It hadn't brought contentment; instead, she felt a hollowness, as if she had poured out one concoction and filled herself with another, but it was like trying to quench a fire with ashes, the base of her core unyielding. Freedom had come at a cost --one weight lifted, another pressing down. The mountains offered solitude, but echoes of the past marred their silence, whispering reminders of what she had done.

She was walking through the forest near her remote cabin one evening when she came across a young girl sobbing by a stream. The girl looked up, stricken by fear when Medusa drew near.

"Please," the young lady begged in a tiny whisper, "Don't hurt me."

Medusa's cringed, her heart filled with a familiar ache. She knelt beside the girl and spoke in a voice softer than it had ever been. "I'm not going to hurt you. What's wrong?"

The girl looked away, lost in thought. Then, she spoke. "They say that I made it up. That I just wanted attention. But...I know what happened. I just..just wanted someone to listen."

The snakes in Medusa's hair stopped writhing and retracted their tongues. She knew that pain all too well. "I believe you," her voice was gentle, a dulcet croon against the powerful belt she had used against the mayor and his followers. "You don't have to face this alone."

She extended her hand, hovering it just above the girl's shoulder. The girl flinched at first, but leaned into Medusa's touch, her sobs quieted.

In that moment, she knew that she could do more than turn others to stone -she could offer the gift of feeling and solace. She could choose to caress, even when the world was heavy-handed.

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Over time, she shared her story online. Her tale became a lifeline for the downtrodden and downcast. Her blog became their sanctuary -a haven for those who refused to have their lights dimmed.

The town never forgot her. The statues loomed, stretching like fozen shadows across the square, a silent warning of what happened when someone refused to be broken.

Medusa had found her voice, her power, her peace. They were hers -and hers alone.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    great tale

  • Absolutely spectacular, this challenge has resulted in some excellent and amazing stories and this is one of them

  • Komal12 months ago

    This is absolutely epic! A fierce, fiery retelling that makes Medusa not just feared but felt. The power, the pain, the defiance—it’s all so raw and commanding. And that ending? Perfection. She doesn’t just break free; she rebuilds. Love it.

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