I was lurking in the shadows late one night, not expecting a meal. I was about to go home hungry when I heard footsteps in the distance. My senses were tingiling, I could hear the blood pumping through his veins. As I got closer, the smell of flesh became intoxicating. I found the human and sunk my teeth into him. I was to busy enjoying my meal to notice the slowly rising Sun. I barley made it back in time to hide in my coffin. The meal I enjoyed would soon seek revenge. I’d have to move tomorrow night.
About the Creator
Alex H Mittelman
I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from Alex H Mittelman and writers in Fiction and other communities.
Creepy Crawly Creature Candy
Names John, I’m from Texas and I own a factory that makes candy with bugs in it. It’s popular amongst tough guys and teenagers. Our biggest seller is chewing gum with roach. People say they like the crunch. I couldn’t blame them, it was delicious. I was working at the factory late when a car crashed into the building and hit the bug cage. The bugs crawled into his car and ate him. I called the employees in for some overtime work. They worked all night to put the bugs into candy after they finished eating, covering up the accident.
By Alex H Mittelman 3 years ago in Fiction
Miss Persephone's Manual to a Seemingly Ordinary Life
Miss Persephone was found at the dining table, her blue eyes swollen, her tears arriving and retreating like the tides of the ocean. Earlier that day, her family had visited her in the retirement home where she had lived for eight years. It was her eightieth birthday.
By Imola Tótha day ago in Fiction
Do You have a Support Network?
Life is harder when you’re on your own. Human beings are social creatures, and we usually feel better when we have support from a strong social network around us. For most people, it’s our families that hold us together like glue.
By Elizabeth Woodsabout 3 hours ago in Psyche
Comments (1)
Oh yeah, they'll become a vampire. I've never thought of a vampire taking revenge. You should do a part 2 to this!