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Lowkey Gnocchi

Private Pasta Eating.

By Stephen Kramer AvitabilePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Lowkey Gnocchi
Photo by Gábor Molnár on Unsplash

When you’re eating Italian dumplings with potato but you’re not letting everyone know about it… It’s a Lowkey Gnocchi night.

They’ll judge.

They’ll stare.

They’ll whisper.

All those carbs.

Doesn’t he know he’ll billow?

That’s a recipe for midsection madness.

But it’s a recipe from my Italian grandmother.

It’s a recipe for happiness, wrapped in a heavy blanket of joy.

I can eat the carbs.

No need to avoid.

I got my own diet plan.

None of which says no to gnocchi.

But still… if they see it… they’ll judge.

I’ll stay quiet.

That’s why it’s a Lowkey Gnocchi night.

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Stephen Kramer Avitabile

I'm a creative writer in the way that I write. I hold the pen in this unique and creative way you've never seen. The content which I write... well, it's still to be determined if that's any good.

https://www.stephenavitabilewriting.com/

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  • Jay Kantor3 years ago

    Hi Stephen ~ Glad to have discovered you on VM Shout-Out *I've subscribed to you with pleasure. Your interesting chosen topics and carefully-skilled illustrations entice me to read more. This article reminds me: 'Italian Dumplings' to my Matzo Balls -  same "Carbs" but different recipes - *Alphabetically I sat next to a 'Kramer in all of my classes: He was the one smart-one that I cheated off; joking, or am I? Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -

  • hahaha, this is great, had "barefoot blue jean night" rhythm, if you listen to country

  • Lonely Loki lowkey loves lovely gnocchi! Say that fast 5 times, lol! I loved your story!

  • Bren3 years ago

    YUM!

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Netflix and Gnocchi? Great micro!

  • J. R. Lowe3 years ago

    Hahaha everyone needs a lowkey Gnocchi night now and then

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Lol, nice play on words, Stephen.

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    I've never tried it! But now I want to!

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