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Look Through My Eye

Part II of A Different Perspective

By Mark GagnonPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

Johnathan still wasn’t sure what he was seeing was real or a bizarre hallucination being projected into his brain by this magical space orb. Perhaps if he removed it from his normally empty eye socket all these peculiar visions of Earth being consumed by a cataclysmic war and their destination world, Terminus, fighting off unknown alien invaders would vanish as quickly as they had appeared. This was truly an enigma wrapped in a conundrum.

If what the orb was showing him was true, everyone on this ship and several others streaking across the galaxy toward Terminus needed to be warned. Whether they chose to continue on to their new home, hoping the invaders were repelled, or return to a planet ravaged by war and glowing in radiation was not a decision he would be allowed to make. However, it was his choice to keep this information to himself or share it with his fellow travelers. This was a bigger decision than you might imagine.

It wasn’t that many years ago that Johnathan was treated as an outcast, someone to be made fun of by his peers for having only one eye. He needed to prove his worthiness before being allowed to perform all but the most menial of jobs. Now he held the very existence of everyone on his ship, as well as several other ships, literally in his eye. Coupled with his troubled background was the fact that Johnathan had disregarded one of the ships cardinal rules. He brought an unknown, untested, piece of space rubble inside the ship without passing through quarantine first. That violation alone could send him to the brig for months.

There was one more issue Johnathan had to contend with, getting the leaders to see and understand that what the orb is showing him is what’s happening at both locations in real time. If he were to remove the orb and give it to Captain Clark, would it show the Captain the same views as he saw, or would it stay as black as space. How could Johnathan be sure everyone was seeing through his special eye?

A loud knock on his cabin door snapped Johnathan back into the here and now.

“The captain wants all inspection crewmembers on the bridge in ten minutes. That includes you eyepatch.”

Johnathan knew immediately that the person on the other side of the door was his childhood antagonist, Damien. The reason he was missing an eye was due to a mock sword fight that the bully took too far. Instead of apologizing, Damien took it as an opportunity to harass and belittle Johnathan at every opportunity. This time his wisecrack gave Johnathan an idea. He had stopped wearing a patch two years ago since most of the crew and passengers had gotten used to seeing his missing eye socket. He would be wearing one to this meeting.

The inspection crew formed two lines with Johnathan taking his usual spot at the end of the second line. The Captain walked out and everyone snapped to attention. He was a man of few words and came right to the point.

“I received a communication from Terminus shortly after we went through the meteor shower. Based on our location from the colony, I believe the message is approximately a year old. They’re transmission is describing an encounter with a new and apparently unfriendly life force. I’m telling you this because I need a detailed report on the battle worthiness of the ship. You men have walked the surface of this craft, is it battle worthy?”

Every man except for one answered in unison with a resounding, “Yes sir!”

The Captain scanned the crew, his gaze stopping Johnathan.

“You didn’t answer, soldier, do you have something to say?”

“No Captain, I have something to show you. I can only hope that after you look through my eye you make the right choices.”

Johnathan raised his eyepatch.

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About the Creator

Mark Gagnon

My life has been spent traveling here and abroad. Now it's time to write.

I have three published books: Mitigating Circumstances, Short Stories for Open Minds, and Short Stories from an Untethered Mind. Unmitigated Greed is do out soon.

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  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    So is this a continuation of the Part II I've just read? Or have I read them in the wrong order? Either way, I'm enjoying this space tale.

  • Test9 months ago

    Initially I missed the subtitle and thought "dang this character seems familiar" then scrolled back up and got my confirmation! Love that you continued this story, Mark!! I hope there's a part three. I need to know how the crew received Jonathan's information!!

  • Komal9 months ago

    Ooh, I love that cliffhanger! You had me hooked from the first line. Damien better get what's coming to him, because I have zero patience for childhood bullies in space. 🤨

  • Reminds me of Corum's Eye is The Knight of The Swords and the subsequent novels, excellent intallment

  • Hehehehehe I'm eagerly waiting to know what's gonna happen next

  • Caroline Craven9 months ago

    I hope Damien gets his comeuppance in the third part. This was brill Mark - always love reading your work.

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Oh! I remember Johnathon!

  • Lamar Wiggins9 months ago

    Man! That was good, Mark! Brief and just enough to get me going, lol. Nice cliffhanger. Hope to see the next one!

  • Thanks for reminding me about part 1 of this story L.C.

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