Little Inconveniences
A Microfiction

Harry blinked several times, willing the sight of the body and the blood on the tile floor to disappear. But they didn’t.
When his father had called Harry he’d been sure there was some mistake. Kentville was a small town with no major roads running through it. Gas station convenience stores weren’t unusual targets for thieves, but the one his father had run for the past thirty years was such an unlikely target with it being so far off the beaten path. Everyone knew everyone in Kentville, but Harry didn’t recognize the face of the man with the bullet hole in his head.
Looking away from the dead man, Harry tried to focus on the conversation between his father and Sheriff Wilkins.
“Did the thief come in alone?” the sheriff asked.
Harry’s father nodded.
“But Mrs. Chaney across the way said she saw two men get out of a black car,” said the Sheriff skeptically.
“Well, only one tried to rob me.”
“Alright. Then what happened?”
“He asked for cigarettes and when I turned to get them he pulled the gun out. Told me to give him all the money in the register. I pretended to open the drawer. Then I pulled out my gun and shot him.” Harry’s father nodded to the pistol sitting on the counter.
“Security footage?”
“Camera’s broken.”
Sheriff Wilkins stroked his mustache. “Okay. That’s enough for now.” He looked at Harry. “Get your father home. If I have more questions I’ll come by tomorrow morning.”
Once Harry and his father were seated in his car, a few moments passed in silence.
Then his father let out a deep breath. “Did you do what I asked?”
“I got the tape and destroyed the camera.”
“Good.”
“But why?
“Do you remember Callum Perry?”
“Of course I do. He bullied me all the time in school. Stole from your store a bunch too. He’d brag about how you were too scared to stop him.”
His father sighed. “I did let him get away with stealing. But not because I was scared of him. I knew his dad was a lazy drunk and the boy didn’t have anything to eat at home. He only stole food and just enough for what he needed.”
Harry stared at his father’s weary face. “Was he here tonight?”
His father nodded. “He brought his worthless friend with him from the city. They needed money. I wouldn’t hand over the money in the register. Callum’s friend was going to shoot me. But then Callum pulled out his own gun and shot first.”
Harry’s father never cried but tears started to trickle down his cheeks. “I told him to leave the gun and run. He looked at me and asked why I didn’t call the sheriff all those years ago when he was stealing candy. Then he said he wished I would have. That he hoped I would every time he stole something. And then he just ran out the door.”
Author's Note: This story was written for the Spring 2025 Microfiction Writing Battle.
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.



Comments (23)
I did not see that coming, and wow. The father had a good soul, I think, still looking out for the boy after everything. Congratulations on your top story, D.K.!
What a twist and so smoothly introduced. Well deserved Top Story, D.K.
Awesome!!! My kind of story, D.K. I love a good twist, and did not see it coming. I joined the battle too and also had 'small town secrets'. I may publish it here soon. Congrats on TS
This is incredible, DK! You took a conventional setting and made it both special and humane. Simply wonderful storytelling!
Ooooo! I love the complexity to the characters back story, well done!! Also, congrats on Top Story, DK!!
Congratulations on a well deserved Top Story
Rolling back to say, Congrats on Top Story, DK! This was brilliant
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Back to say congrats on the Top Story! 🎉
Wonderful - so many layers!
Oh I wasn’t expecting that ending. Damn. This was short but I was totally invested in the characters. Excellent DK. I hope you made it through to the next round.
Just as good the second time around!
You just ripped my heart out. If only Harry's dad didn't get Callum get away all those times, he might have been a dead man now. Your story is definitely making me think alot. It may be a short one, but holds a deep message. I loved it!
Well-wrought and an excellent twist!
D- No Guns~Simpler Times: Just "FillerUp & Check the Oil & Tires..?" -J-
Oh, what a heart-wrenching twist at the end
Wow! This is a winner! Excellent use of the prompts.. packs quite a punch.
Great job with the prompts! I really felt in the moment
Great microfiction, D.K.! I love the heartfelt twist at the end. Good luck in the challenge!
I hope this made it to the next round if there was one. Excellently written, D.K.!
Good luck with this excellent entry. What a great story, with such empathy.
Wow, I was so invested in this. What an emotional roller coaster!!! Well done :)
Ah, goodness, DK. Emotional rollercoaster. Love how we're dropped in the tense scene and you build the sorta "WTF" tension of the son looking at the scene and the dialogue is incredibly tight. The nice little twists in the tale are perfectly executed in my opinion. I wish there were more of this story! Well done!