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The Flash

By Sian N. CluttonPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2024
Lifeless
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Sirens wailed.

Jonny stared as bystanders rushed to the scene, pushing past him on the curb as though unaware he was there.

He blinked as a tear caressed his cheek.

Jonny squinted against the flashing lights as car doors slammed and emergency personnel joined the rescue efforts.

He tried to call out, but his voice escaped him. He watched the flames dance as frantic voices echoed.

His head pounded. He knew he was hurt, but he didn’t know how. He itched his face; his hand dripped red.

Wide-eyed, he watched as people hurried to the lifeless body of his mother and began C.P.R. Jonny’s gaze wandered to the pile of pouring gravel as the hidden car seat crushed under its weight.

‘Are you listening to me?’

Jonny jumped, blinking rapidly.

‘Are you listening to me?’ tutted his mum, stopping at a red light. His baby sister cooed happily in the seat beside him. ‘Put your seat belt ON.’

‘Mum?’ he muttered; an air of doom filled the car.

Vehicles rushed past the intersection as Johnny frantically searched amongst the moving traffic. His eyes locked on an upcoming truck, over-weighted with construction materials. He held his breath as it gathered speed. Pieces of gravel littered their rooftop as it thundered past.

His mother put the car in gear as the light changed.

‘Mum! Stop!’ Jonny shouted; his sister began to cry.

‘Jonny!’ His mother scolded as she pulled away. ‘You scared her!’

The car gathered speed.

‘Mum, no!’ he pounced from his seat, wrapping his arms around her head, blocking her view.

Screaming, she slammed on the brakes, throwing Jonny back into his seat.

‘What’s gotten into you?’ She gasped, turning to look at him.

In the distance, tyres screeched as people began to scream.

An explosion rocked the car.

familyHorrorMicrofictionMysteryPsychologicalShort StorythrillerStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Sian N. Clutton

A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.

I sincerly hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  1. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Fluck me, I was on the edge of my seat!! Brillient!

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a year ago

    omg, this was so intense, did Jonny just die and was watching the scene of his death?? This was so anxiety triggering, my heart beating fast. wooah Congrats on top story!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Wow that was heavy. Truly a viscerally charged piece here👏❤️

  • Katherine D. Grahamabout a year ago

    You accomplished offering me the horror and thrill experience.You wrote a moving tale.

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Powerful and poignant.

  • Opara Patrickabout a year ago

    Excellent work

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Edge of my seat...

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    You write so beautifully Sian! So captivating! Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This is such a powerful and well written story - intriguing, too. Congratulations on the top story - it’s well-earned!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Excellent story!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Just wanted to say congrats on your Top Story!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic mystery!!! Wonderfully written!!!❤️❤️💕 Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Whoa, so tense and anxiety inducing!! I wonder if he saved them or not. Congrats on TS!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Tense stuff! So, did he save the day or did he not? I know an explosion rocked the car but did he do just enough to keep them from becoming victims? I do hope so.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Back to say congrats on Top Story!!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Wow!! So well done, Sian! Such an engaging read! I think I held my breath for the whole second half

  • Oh my, he still wasn't able to prevent it. Loved your story!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    When that Spydy sense kicks in people really should listen.

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