Lifeless
The Flash
Sirens wailed.
Jonny stared as bystanders rushed to the scene, pushing past him on the curb as though unaware he was there.
He blinked as a tear caressed his cheek.
Jonny squinted against the flashing lights as car doors slammed and emergency personnel joined the rescue efforts.
He tried to call out, but his voice escaped him. He watched the flames dance as frantic voices echoed.
His head pounded. He knew he was hurt, but he didn’t know how. He itched his face; his hand dripped red.
Wide-eyed, he watched as people hurried to the lifeless body of his mother and began C.P.R. Jonny’s gaze wandered to the pile of pouring gravel as the hidden car seat crushed under its weight.
‘Are you listening to me?’
Jonny jumped, blinking rapidly.
‘Are you listening to me?’ tutted his mum, stopping at a red light. His baby sister cooed happily in the seat beside him. ‘Put your seat belt ON.’
‘Mum?’ he muttered; an air of doom filled the car.
Vehicles rushed past the intersection as Johnny frantically searched amongst the moving traffic. His eyes locked on an upcoming truck, over-weighted with construction materials. He held his breath as it gathered speed. Pieces of gravel littered their rooftop as it thundered past.
His mother put the car in gear as the light changed.
‘Mum! Stop!’ Jonny shouted; his sister began to cry.
‘Jonny!’ His mother scolded as she pulled away. ‘You scared her!’
The car gathered speed.
‘Mum, no!’ he pounced from his seat, wrapping his arms around her head, blocking her view.
Screaming, she slammed on the brakes, throwing Jonny back into his seat.
‘What’s gotten into you?’ She gasped, turning to look at him.
In the distance, tyres screeched as people began to scream.
An explosion rocked the car.
About the Creator
Sian N. Clutton
A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.
I sincerly hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes



Comments (20)
well done
Fluck me, I was on the edge of my seat!! Brillient!
omg, this was so intense, did Jonny just die and was watching the scene of his death?? This was so anxiety triggering, my heart beating fast. wooah Congrats on top story!
Wow that was heavy. Truly a viscerally charged piece here👏❤️
You accomplished offering me the horror and thrill experience.You wrote a moving tale.
Powerful and poignant.
Excellent work
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Edge of my seat...
You write so beautifully Sian! So captivating! Congrats on your Top Story!
This is such a powerful and well written story - intriguing, too. Congratulations on the top story - it’s well-earned!
Excellent story!
Just wanted to say congrats on your Top Story!
Fantastic mystery!!! Wonderfully written!!!❤️❤️💕 Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Whoa, so tense and anxiety inducing!! I wonder if he saved them or not. Congrats on TS!
Tense stuff! So, did he save the day or did he not? I know an explosion rocked the car but did he do just enough to keep them from becoming victims? I do hope so.
Back to say congrats on Top Story!!
Wow!! So well done, Sian! Such an engaging read! I think I held my breath for the whole second half
Oh my, he still wasn't able to prevent it. Loved your story!
When that Spydy sense kicks in people really should listen.