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King Kuan's Galactic Odyssey

Chapter 3: Echoes of the Abyss

By Patient Joel NISHIMWEPublished 11 months ago 3 min read
King Kuan's Galactic Odyssey
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The Endeavor hurtled through hyperspace, its engines humming steadily, yet the tension on the bridge was thick. The crew sat in silence, still shaken by the horrors they had encountered. The wraiths, the whispers, the unnatural pull of the anomaly—none of it made sense, and yet, they had barely escaped with their lives.

King Kuan sat in his command chair, fingers interlocked as he stared at the view beyond the bridge’s viewport. Streaks of starlight blurred past, but in the depths of space, something still lingered in his mind.

"Captain," Rayne’s voice broke the silence. "I’m picking up a residual energy signature. The same frequency as the anomaly."

Kuan’s eyes narrowed. "That’s impossible. We destroyed it."

Rayne shook her head. "I thought so too. But something... followed us."

A chill settled over the crew.

Kato turned to the captain. "Maybe it's just interference from the explosion?"

Before anyone could respond, the ship shuddered violently. Alarms blared, and the lights flickered. The Endeavor dropped out of hyperspace with a sickening lurch, sending the crew tumbling. Sparks burst from the control panels as warning sirens echoed through the corridors.

"Report!" Kuan barked, steadying himself.

Rayne’s hands flew over the controls. "Something forced us out of hyperspace! It’s not a mechanical failure—this was external!"

Kato swore. "What in the abyss is that?!"

Through the viewport, an immense rift yawned open in space, swirling with a dark, pulsating energy. It was a tear in reality, and from its depths, eerie figures drifted forward—shadows without form, their glowing eyes piercing the void.

"It followed us," Kuan whispered.

The wraiths had returned.

The ship trembled as the shadowy entities reached for it. The lights dimmed, and an unnatural cold seeped into the bridge. The whispers began again, threading through the ship’s comms, speaking in a thousand voices at once.

"You ran... but we are endless..."

"Shields up!" Kuan ordered, his voice unwavering despite the dread clawing at his spine.

"Already at maximum, but they’re phasing through!" Rayne shouted.

The first of the wraiths slipped into the ship, their ethereal forms twisting as they drifted into the bridge. Kato fired his rifle, the energy rounds passing through them harmlessly.

"Weapons are useless!" he growled.

Kuan pulled his own blaster but held fire, his mind racing. "They're tied to the rift. If we close it, we cut them off. Rayne, can we reverse the hyperspace drive, collapse the anomaly?"

Rayne’s fingers danced over the console. "It’s risky. If we miscalculate, we could get pulled in."

"Do it."

The ship groaned as energy surged through its systems. The engines flared, sending shockwaves rippling through space. The wraiths howled in agony as the rift began to shrink, its pull reversing.

The ship rocked violently. Consoles exploded. The rift was collapsing, but the Endeavor was caught in its grasp.

"We’re being pulled in!" Kato yelled.

Kuan gritted his teeth. "Full thrusters! Break free!"

The engines screamed as they fought against the gravitational pull. The wraiths screeched as they were dragged into the closing void, their forms dissipating into nothingness. The rift imploded with a deafening silence, and the Endeavor was flung backward into normal space.

The crew collapsed, breathing hard.

"Status?" Kuan asked.

Rayne exhaled. "We’re clear. The rift is gone. No further anomalies detected."

A heavy silence filled the bridge before Kato let out a nervous chuckle. "Let’s not do that again."

King Kuan stood, his gaze fixed on the now-empty void where the rift had been. He had a feeling this wasn’t truly over. Something deeper, something ancient, had taken notice of them.

"Set course for the nearest starbase," he finally said. "We need to regroup."

As the Endeavor surged forward once more, a single whisper echoed faintly through the ship, barely audible but impossible to ignore.

"We will meet again..."

And then, silence.

AdventureClassicalFan FictionFantasyHistoricalMysterySeries

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Patient Joel NISHIMWE

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