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King Kuan's Galactic Odyssey

Chapter 2: The Phantom Echoes

By Patient Joel NISHIMWEPublished 11 months ago 3 min read
King Kuan's Galactic Odyssey
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The derelict ship groaned as King Kuan and his team advanced cautiously, their boots echoing against the rusted metallic floor. The fog that filled the corridors seemed alive, slithering around their bodies as if studying them. The air was thick with an unnatural hum, vibrating deep in their chests, a sound both ancient and foreboding.

Kato swept his rifle across the hallway, his knuckles white. "Captain, are we sure we want to be here? This place feels... wrong."

"We don’t have a choice," King Kuan replied, his voice steady. "If there are survivors, we need to find them."

Commander Rayne checked her scanner. "Still detecting faint life signs deeper within. But something else is moving. I can’t get a clear reading."

A sudden whisper slithered through the air. It was unintelligible at first—like static—but then it formed words. "You... should not be here."

The lights flickered. Shadows twisted unnaturally along the walls, stretching and writhing. A deep, guttural growl resonated through the corridor.

"Weapons ready," King Kuan ordered.

A low hiss filled the air as the shadows solidified into spectral figures, their hollow eyes burning with an eerie white glow. They didn’t move, only watched.

"I don't like this," Kato muttered.

Suddenly, the figures lunged.

The corridor erupted into chaos. Energy bolts flashed as the team opened fire. The wraith-like creatures moved unnaturally fast, phasing in and out of existence, their claws slicing through the air. One of the security officers screamed as a shadow passed through his body, leaving him gasping, his skin turning a sickly gray.

"Fall back!" King Kuan shouted.

They retreated down a branching corridor, slamming a bulkhead shut behind them. The creatures clawed at the metal, their shrieks piercing the silence.

Rayne breathed heavily. "Those things... they’re not just ghosts. They’re feeding off the ship’s energy. And ours."

"Then we need to cut off their food supply," King Kuan said. "Where’s the ship’s power core?"

Rayne studied her scanner. "Three levels down. But Captain, if we shut it down, we might not be able to leave."

"Better trapped in the dark than dead," Kuan said grimly. "Move out."

They pushed forward, navigating through shifting corridors. The deeper they went, the stranger the ship became—walls twisted into unnatural angles, doorways led to dead ends, and time itself seemed to distort, slowing and quickening unpredictably. Finally, they reached the engine chamber.

It was a massive cathedral of machinery, with a pulsing core of swirling dark energy at its center. Strange symbols flickered along the walls, shifting between languages. But there, just below the core, a lone figure was shackled to the machinery—a human, barely alive, his body flickering between reality and shadow.

Kuan approached cautiously. "Who are you?"

The man’s eyes fluttered open. "I... was the captain of this ship. My crew... they’re all gone. The anomaly... it keeps me here."

Rayne knelt beside him. "How do we stop it?"

The man coughed, his voice barely a whisper. "Destroy the core... or join us. "The shadows around them began to stir. The wraiths were coming.

King Kuan made his decision. "Set charges on the core. We’re ending this."

As his team worked, the wraiths howled, closing in. King Kuan held them back with his rifle, his heart pounding. The moment the last charge was set, he grabbed Rayne and Kato. "Run!"

They sprinted back to the ship, the wraiths screaming behind them. Just as they reached the airlock, a thunderous explosion rocked the vessel.

The derelict ship trembled, its core imploding. The wraiths shrieked one last time before vanishing into nothingness. The anomaly itself seemed to flicker... then collapse.

The Endeavor barely escaped before the ship was swallowed by the void.

On the bridge, King Kuan watched as the darkness consumed the haunted vessel. The distress beacon was silenced at last.

"Set course for home," he said quietly.

As the Endeavor jumped into hyperspace, a whisper echoed through the empty corridors.

"Thank you..."

And then, silence.

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  • Patient Joel NISHIMWE (Author)11 months ago

    I think, it will end up worse.

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