Imposter (daily micro edition)
Tuesday 15th October, Story #289/366. There is a slightly longer version of this story. I feel that one is better; I've got more words to play with to spin it out and build tension. But you do you, boo.

It's dark. The patients are asleep. My shoes squeak. I barely notice the antiseptic smell anymore, but now it feels strong in my nose.
Something tingles my spine, and lifts the hairs on my arms.
I'm tired. It's been a long, busy shift. I'm still new at this. I haven't done this task before.
I want to accost someone, find an excuse for them to accompany me...
Sometimes, in forests, it goes unnaturally quiet. Even animals avoid a place Touched. Are people subconsciously avoiding this hallway?
The door is ajar, the room beyond darker. I move into the room. Irrational fear grips me: the door will blow shut behind me, a lock click...
Nothing.
She looks like a cartoon ghost; a child's last-minute costume for Hallowe'en. A person under a white sheet. I almost burst out laughing.
I grip the sheet. I cannot bear to do it slowly, so I rip it off quick. I look down.
I gasp. She's ghastly. Death hasn't been kind. Her face is a rictus, her hands claws. Her hair, wiry and white, is sparse on her bloodless scalp. She stares at something I can't see.
I feel for a pulse, for a whole century of a minute. Her talon flashes out, catching my wrist in an iron grip... in my mind. I pretend all's well, my fingers pressed to her cool, papery skin. Locked there as surely as if she had grabbed me.
Now I check for breathing, for two centuries. I lean close. I'm the prince. She's not sleeping, nor a beauty. Her head's tilted back, her mouth open, as if for a kiss. Oh, please don't wake!
We're still. In a static dance.
tick tick tick...
almost done!
Something grabs my wrist. Is this my imagination? No: it hurts. A lot. In this heartbeat (mine) I'm less afraid than shocked that the thing I feared is actually happening.
Fear returns, flooding back and slamming into every cell of me. She feeds. I go limp, fear bleeding away, sleep swirling... Like I've been given benzodiazepine-
-shoes squeak. I hear his breath, his heart. I smell his fear. I wait for him to pull back the sheet. We are hungry.
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Quick author's note
Word count: 366
(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's notes.)
Submitted on Tuesday 15th October at 22:43
A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This continues my 289 daily micro-fiction story streak since 1st January.
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Comments (6)
What a scene. Chilly. Well done! How many different types of hungry are there?
Your ability to write so many fascinating stories amazes me constantly, LC. Well done!
Really like this scary story so much.
Nice love twist
Came here after the longer version. Should have read this one first as I don’t know if I’d be able to sleep at night.
Phew! That was both quick and frightening. A great imagination there!