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If Time Stood Still

I'd keep you here forever

By Kelly RobertsonPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
If Time Stood Still
Photo by Artem Kovalev on Unsplash

"I'm sorry you had a rough day, Josie."

I smiled weakly and met Sam's gaze. There was always an abundance of care locked in those chocolate eyes that I knew I never truly deserved. "Thanks, Sam. It's not your fault though."

Sam heaved a sigh and leaned against me. "I know, but I'm here for you anyways. I'll always be here."

I blinked back tears and tried desperately not to think about Sam's test results. Hugging him closer, I kissed the top of his head. "I love you, Bud."

Sam's tail wagged harder. "Me, too."

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Kelly Robertson

Wrangler of chaos. Creator of more. Writing whatever my heart desires, from fantasy to poetry and more!

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  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Oh, my heart! 🥹❤️ You somehow managed to make this so beautiful. Amazing job!1 🥹❤️❤️

  • Poppy 3 years ago

    So beautifully tragic!!

  • Lisa H3 years ago

    Beautifully done! I love the way you swept me right into the twist.

  • Gerald Holmes3 years ago

    This really got me by surprise. I lost my golden last year, so this touched me deeply. Congrats on Top Story.

  • Linda Njoku3 years ago

    I felt sad ! Nice one

  • Excellent Love it!

  • A. Lenae3 years ago

    What a beautiful moment captured and eloquently painted. I very recently had to say goodbye to my extraordinary dog, and this story does an excellent job of depicting the kind of love that can exist when you have a canine companion and the heartbreak of "always" never being long enough. Well done.

  • This is so sad but beautiful. Made me want to cry🥺. Well done on top story.

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    This was a genuine surprise. So much emotion ignited in such a short time. Bravo. 👏👏👏 And, Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Oh, just tear my heart out already! 💔. Well done!

  • Heather Zieffle 3 years ago

    Love it!

  • Excellent

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Touching!!! Congratulations on T S.!!!💖💖💕

  • K. Kocheryan3 years ago

    My heart! Nice job!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Oh my. Fantastic writing. Congrats on the TS

  • Caroline Craven3 years ago

    Excellent writing. Great story.

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    This. This is beautiful and so deserving of a Top Story.

  • Thank you, and congrats on your top story.

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    I absolutely LOVE this. Been there too many times!

  • sleepy drafts3 years ago

    Ok, and now I'm crying and sitting here with goosebumps all over my body 😭Incredible job. 💓

  • Matthew J. Fromm3 years ago

    brb hugging my dog for the rest of the day...

  • Sweet, Congratulations on your Top Story🎉💖✨😉❗

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Lovely and tragic at the same time. Congratulations on your top story Kelly!

  • hayaadnan3 years ago

    And congratulation.💖✨

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