Good Morning Indeed!
A Miami Hotel Elevator Drabble
My groggy morning son and I were riding our incredibly slow hotel elevator this morning. Annoyingly, we had to wait for it and it hardly had any space for us as a group of four people was heading out.
"Good morning!" said a middle-aged man from the group.
"Morning," my son grunted as I nodded.
"Tis good indeed, God gave us another day!" the man added. My son lightened up a little.
"Enjoy your days as life's going too fast!"
Everyone in the elevator started to chuckle.
"So fast I'd already have four grand kids!"
We all laughed out loud.
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Lana V Lynx
Avid reader and occasional writer of satire and short fiction. For my own sanity and security, I write under a pen name. My books: Moscow Calling - 2017 and President & Psychiatrist
@lanalynx.bsky.social
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Comments (8)
You are so much better at drabbles than me 😂
lol, love the drabble
I laughed because everyone else on the elevator laughed so I joined in. Amazing how we can making characters of a story come to life in such few words. Great job, Lana!
Wonderful drabble, Lana! Such a nice lighthearted read and slice of everyday life!
And then there's me who doesn't get what was funny 😅😅
Beautiful fantastic is what I say almost everyday recently 😊Thank You for sharing it brightens my day and moment 🌞🌞🌞Have wonderful day ! 🌸
Oh this was lovely. Amazing how the mood of another person, cheery, light and intentional, could bring the spirit of a child back to contentment and happiness. Funny at the end there, four grandkids is plenty. Where is the time going lol. 🤗♥️
This is funny! I noticed a tiny error, though, in the last bit of dialogue. Should it be "I'd" instead of "I've".