
Gideon stares into shadows of nothingness. To say he was lost would be an understatement, with no idea how he got here. The last things he remembers is the smell of burning rubber, numbness throughout his body, flying in the dark, searing pain, bright lights, and strange chaotic voices.
One word...CLEAR… then all went dark.
After, his mind wandered, trapped in many endless nightmares, blurring together like dimensional time jumps. Lost.
A voice breaks the silence, an ethereal figure, shrouded in a cloak stands alone. “Welcome Gideon.”
His own voice sounds surreal. “Where am I, why the hell am I naked and covered in scars, and how do you know my name?”
“Interesting.”
Standing straight Gideon asks. “What’s interesting?”
“How calm you are.”
“We’ll see for how long if you don’t start answering.”
“Fair enough. Gideon, your subconscious is here in the Dream Void.”
“My subconscious?”
“Yes, a manifestation of sorts. Please listen while I explain. Your mind is here but your body lays in a coma. You’ve been chosen, as Guardian, to defend those in the sleep world. You must save those souls from their horrors, become their Saviour, their Hero if you will. Each scar represents a demon you must defeat. Demons who torment their hosts, causing harmful repercussions, like drug addiction, crime, or suicide, among others. Once all your scars are cleared you may return.”
“Demons?”
“People like yourself, fighting for their freedom out of the Void, the Yin to your Yang. However, should you fail, a new scar will be added.”
“I’m supposed to fight demons naked, without powers?”
With a chuckle. “It’s the dream world Gideon. Wear and do whatever you want, put on a cape if you wish. Imagination is your superpower, use it to survive.”
“Survive?”
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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Comments (15)
Well done! This is an origin story that begs for a sequel! Amazing concept and execution, JBaz!
I hope you write more about Gideon! ☺
This is a unique and utterly amazing premise - I'm with Lamar, I would love to see some of his adventures beyond this point! Thank you for sharing this awesome work, JBaz!
Cool. I would love to see some of the outrageous situations he would encounter and how he would defeat them. Nice setup and finish to your story, J!
Imagination is definitely a superpower. I could not help but chuckle to this line 😂I’m supposed to fight demons naked, without powers?” ( this would disarm anyone to fight someone naked,lol)
Why does this seem kind of fair to my mind?
Okay, that was soooo scaryyyy!! It's like Gideon is held hostage and is being forced to act as a hero to survive. Loved your story!
I'd like to see this in an episode of Twilight Zone. It would work well there. Well done, Jason!
Gripping! Jason, you knocked this out of the park. I want to read the next chapter!
I liked this a lot, a different take on the challenge! Very cool👌
Imagination is obviously a superpower that you and Gideon share!
Sounds like the twelve labors of Hercules. No sweat big guy! Great entry to the challenge, Jason!
Oh wow, poor Gideon, to be thrown into so much power and responsibility! Hope he survives.
This is great! Well done, ince again.
Oh!! Jason, this was seriously creative!! I was sucked in from the beginnign and left craving more!! Well played!!