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Get Out of My Head

Music issn't always soothing

By Mark GagnonPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2025
Get Out of My Head
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When I first heard it I was mesmerized. Maybe it was the backbeat that captured my brain or possibly the syncopated rhythm that snaked its way into my every thought. The melody was definitely captivating. Whatever the reason, I was ensnared in its clutches, and the song had no intentions of letting me go.

The tune sounded harmless enough the first time I listened to it on the radio. What was attention catching for me, unlike most rhythms, was a unique 5/4 beat instead of the normal 4/4 or 3/4 cadence. It must have been that extra beat that first piqued my interest. As I continued to become more and more absorbed by the smooth beat and the way it would run along in an even cadence for four beats then become interrupted by a rogue thump, shifting the smooth rhythmic flow into something totally different, a unique direction.

The song forced my mind to ask why. Why did the composer decide to disrupt the flow? Why did the rhythm shift during the middle of the song? Why, once the listener became settled in the song’s smooth jazz world that it created, was it necessary to interrupt his or her train of thought with a sudden beat shift?

It only took one time listening to this song to cause all these questions and so many more to run untethered in my mind. They are questions that will never be answered because both Paul Desmond the composer, and Dave Brubeck the musician who brought the song to prominence in 1959 are dead.

Maybe sometime in the future I will finally rid myself of this unending earworm. Until then, I will lay in bed surrounded by the black of night playing an endless loop of the song Take Five over and over in my head and asking questions that will never be answered.

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About the Creator

Mark Gagnon

My life has been spent traveling here and abroad. Now it's time to write.

I have three published books: Mitigating Circumstances, Short Stories for Open Minds, and Short Stories from an Untethered Mind. Unmitigated Greed is do out soon.

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  • Sara Wilson5 months ago

    Congrats on your top story 👏

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    Great read! Definitely worthy of Top Story. Congrats!

  • Farman Bacha5 months ago

    Brilliant piece Sir Mark. You turned a simple earworm into something unforgettable 👍

  • JBaz5 months ago

    Back to say congratulations .

  • Test5 months ago

    I get the whole ear worm sensation, I always have something stuck in my head... but the same song for many days could be torturous. 😅 Anyway, loved this Papa Mark!!

  • Sofia James5 months ago

    Nice

  • Raymond G. Taylor5 months ago

    Have you tried dancing to it? It can be done. Take Five is to me one of the most memorable instrumental songs I have heard. Such a simple variation but one that was delivered with aplomb. Well done for capturing the mood and congratulations on the TS

  • Abdulahad Khan5 months ago

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  • Orfeostory5 months ago

    Thanks for your sharing information.

  • Have you published this before Mark? It felt vaguely familiar to me. Congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • 🎵"Take Five" was the first song on radio that made me feel, "I'm Home." No words, just music. 🎵🎶🎵

  • JBaz5 months ago

    I know you have this listed as fiction but damn of this is real Every morning a song floats in my head Some I thought I forgot about until Ba da dum

  • Been there, earworms get old real quick. Thank you for sharing, Mark!

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