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Instincts of Survival

A brave woman hides behind a massive tree to escape a wild bear in the mountains

By Bilal MohammadiPublished 5 days ago 3 min read

The mountain air was thinner than Lina remembered. Each breath burned her lungs as she climbed higher along the narrow trail, her boots scraping against loose stones. Pine trees surrounded her like silent guards, their tall shadows stretching across the rocky ground. She had come alone to clear her mind, believing the mountains were safer than the noise of the world below.

She was wrong.

The sound came suddenly—a deep, heavy rustle followed by a low growl that vibrated through the ground. Lina froze. Her heart slammed against her ribs as she slowly turned her head.

A bear.

It stood several meters away, massive and dark, its thick fur catching the dim afternoon light. Its eyes were fixed on her, curious but alert. Time seemed to slow as fear wrapped around her like ice.

Run, her mind screamed.

She turned and sprinted uphill, branches whipping against her arms, her breath coming out in sharp gasps. The ground was uneven, forcing her to stumble more than once. Behind her, the bear moved—slow but powerful, every step a reminder that she was fragile in this wild place.

Her legs burned. Panic blurred her thoughts.

Then she saw it.

A giant tree stood slightly off the trail, ancient and wide, its trunk thick enough to hide a small car. Without thinking, Lina veered toward it, circling around the massive trunk and pressing her back against the rough bark. She clamped a hand over her mouth, forcing herself to stay silent.

The bear reached the clearing moments later.

Lina peeked around the tree just enough to see its massive form. The bear sniffed the air, standing on its hind legs for a moment, scanning the area. Lina’s knees shook so badly she thought they might give her away. She closed her eyes, focusing on her breathing—slow, quiet, controlled.

The tree became her shield.

Minutes passed like hours. The wind whispered through the leaves, carrying the scent of pine and earth. The bear circled the area, its claws scraping softly against rocks. Once, it came close—too close. Lina could hear its breath, heavy and slow, just on the other side of the trunk.

She stayed perfectly still.

Her mind raced with thoughts of mistakes—coming alone, ignoring warning signs, trusting her confidence more than her instincts. Yet beneath the fear, something else stirred: determination. She wanted to live. She would survive.

Finally, the bear lowered itself back onto all fours. After one last sniff, it turned and lumbered away, disappearing into the trees with a deep, fading rustle.

Lina didn’t move.

She waited until the forest felt still again, until the sounds of birds cautiously returned. Only then did she allow herself to slide down the tree, sitting on the ground with her head in her hands. Her whole body trembled as the weight of the moment crashed over her.

Tears streamed down her face—not from weakness, but from relief.

After several minutes, she stood slowly, listening carefully. The mountains were quiet again, as if nothing had happened. She brushed dirt from her clothes and leaned once more against the giant tree, placing her palm against its bark.

“Thank you,” she whispered, unsure whether she meant the tree, the mountain, or fate itself.

The walk back down was slower, more respectful. Every sound mattered now. Every shadow held meaning. Lina realized the mountains were not dangerous—they were honest. They demanded awareness, humility, and respect.

When she finally reached the edge of the trail, the sun was beginning to set, painting the sky in shades of gold and crimson. Lina paused and looked back at the towering peaks.

She had come seeking peace and found something greater.

She had discovered her instinct to survive.

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Bilal Mohammadi

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