Garden of Eden
Caught in the act- A Kayleigh Fraser Unofficial challenge
And so it was, with no shame they walked the garden naked for all to see. Until Adam noticed a change when Eve brushed past, her delicate skin glistening in the new light of the sun. With a gentle touch he caressed her…
”Dammit Carl, stop playing with my Barbie!”
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50 word count
This is for the Kayleigh Fraser unofficial challenge that I just had to jump in on.
I mean Fifty-words to write a story, why wouldn’t I?
Thanks to Paul Stewart’s entry, as it is how I found this Fun little challenge.
Here is another one of my entries into the challenge:
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it – and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith7 days ago in Humor
Comments (17)
Literally (tee hee hee) made me laugh out loud
Hahaha!! I laughed so hard at the last line!! You're a freaking genius Jason!!! Great work!! 🤣
Haha fun!
Ha! I love it!
Haha. Damnit Carl! That was great.
Reminds me of my introduction to clown ministry in seminary. For the message during worship our clown preacher used a Barbie & Ken pair of dolls to tell the creation story, tossed them in a paper bag, rolled it up, then took a quick peak only to act embarrassed & roll it back up for a little while longer.
What a great take on the challenge, Jason! Well done, Sir!
Made me laugh, JBaz! Broken out of my reverie!
Very cute… I was unaware of this challenge until I saw your story. You inspired me to have a go.
Hahahahahahahahhaha that was hilarious! Loved your story!
Haha I got a good laugh out of this one. Excellent micro
Lol I was not expecting that twist 😂😅 brilliantly done 👌🙏🤍👏
Adorable, laugh out loud twist!
Lol, that was funny 🤣🤣🤣
Love the dose of humour in there!
Ha! Thank you for this- ahem- exposure to the Challenge. It's nude to me....
LOL!! That was an inspired micro!! I thought maybe he'd invite her back to his mojo dojo casa house...hahaha!