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Funeral Pyre

He was a dead man who could not rest, a ghost who could not find peace.

By Marie SinadjanPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
Funeral Pyre
Photo by Bia Octavia on Unsplash

This was written for the Snow Micro Challenge.

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They’d passed through this forest before. He sensed traces of her magic still—in the air, among the trees, in the snow that had thawed and reformed countless times over. The trail was faint, but it would have to do.

He built a fire, which was difficult from the lack of dry wood. Gathering the pieces took even longer, as he’d ceased relying on magic to compensate for his blindness. Magic was noise, and he needed silence to find her.

She wasn’t dead. That was his curse, to remember. That she was only hidden away, in some place he would never find or reach. It hadn’t stopped him from trying. He had searched the worlds for her once before, and he would do it again.

He withdrew a raven from his bag. His father would know—it was one of his, after all—but would not understand. Well, let them think he had gone mad. They already believed that, didn’t they?

How easy it would have been to squeeze the life out of the shivering creature. Instead, he let his magic flow out of his fingers, and with it, his pain and grief and loneliness. He was a dead man who could not rest, a ghost who could not find peace. If he could not cross the realms, then something else would have to, in his stead.

The raven’s weak cawing ceased as he froze its heart.

He laid it on the pyre and sang a hymn for its passing.

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Hi! I'm Marie, a Filipino fantasy author and book reviewer currently based in the UK. I’m the co-author of The Prophecies of Ragnarok, a Norse myth new adult urban fantasy trilogy, and I also have several short stories published in anthologies and literary journals.

You can find more info about me and my books, and also subscribe to my newsletter for more content, here. And if you like what I do, please also consider supporting me on Ko-fi! 🩷 https://ko-fi.com/mariesinadjan

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Marie Sinadjan

Filipino spec fic author and book reviewer based in the UK. https://linktr.ee/mariesinadjan • www.mariesinadjan.com

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  • Anna 2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    I wanted this to keep going! I was hooked!

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    That was descriptive in such a short piece♥️ Loved it

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    So much hinted at here, loved it 😁

  • Ashley Shiflett2 years ago

    This was amazing! So beautiful. ❤️

  • This was great!

  • Harbor Benassa2 years ago

    I love how your descriptions hint at the premise without revealing it explicitly. Great job!

  • Natasha Collazo2 years ago

    Freaking phenomenal

  • Zoe2 years ago

    Hauntingly beautiful and profoundly sad, a tale of loss and undying hope.

  • B2 years ago

    Book quality writing, right here. I was enthralled the entire time. Blind? Magic? Missing woman? Raven? Curses? Crossing realms? Psh. My kind of story.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    'He withdrew a raven from his bag.' Okay, Top Story deserving...

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    This was awesome. Wish there was more! Congrats on the Top Story!

  • sleepy drafts2 years ago

    This was incredible!! I was hooked from the first sentence. Beautifully done. Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Great take on the challenge and glad to see you back

  • Loved this

  • This is truly wonderful. I apologize for asking this on a story but i tried entering ..i did every requirement ex 250 words and in the fiction section....I even did the challenge enter now and EVERY time say not enough words..please help someone?

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Very well done.

  • Skyler Saunders2 years ago

    This story speaks to the fantastic. The mention of magic and the imagery of the raven on the pyre excite and delight. This is a superb piece. Kudos!

  • Test2 years ago

    WOW! Very amazing work!!

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