Funeral Pyre
He was a dead man who could not rest, a ghost who could not find peace.
This was written for the Snow Micro Challenge.
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They’d passed through this forest before. He sensed traces of her magic still—in the air, among the trees, in the snow that had thawed and reformed countless times over. The trail was faint, but it would have to do.
He built a fire, which was difficult from the lack of dry wood. Gathering the pieces took even longer, as he’d ceased relying on magic to compensate for his blindness. Magic was noise, and he needed silence to find her.
She wasn’t dead. That was his curse, to remember. That she was only hidden away, in some place he would never find or reach. It hadn’t stopped him from trying. He had searched the worlds for her once before, and he would do it again.
He withdrew a raven from his bag. His father would know—it was one of his, after all—but would not understand. Well, let them think he had gone mad. They already believed that, didn’t they?
How easy it would have been to squeeze the life out of the shivering creature. Instead, he let his magic flow out of his fingers, and with it, his pain and grief and loneliness. He was a dead man who could not rest, a ghost who could not find peace. If he could not cross the realms, then something else would have to, in his stead.
The raven’s weak cawing ceased as he froze its heart.
He laid it on the pyre and sang a hymn for its passing.
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Hi! I'm Marie, a Filipino fantasy author and book reviewer currently based in the UK. I’m the co-author of The Prophecies of Ragnarok, a Norse myth new adult urban fantasy trilogy, and I also have several short stories published in anthologies and literary journals.
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Marie Sinadjan
Filipino spec fic author and book reviewer based in the UK. https://linktr.ee/mariesinadjan • www.mariesinadjan.com
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Comments (20)
Congrats on Top Story!🥳
I wanted this to keep going! I was hooked!
That was descriptive in such a short piece♥️ Loved it
So much hinted at here, loved it 😁
This was amazing! So beautiful. ❤️
This was great!
I love how your descriptions hint at the premise without revealing it explicitly. Great job!
Freaking phenomenal
Hauntingly beautiful and profoundly sad, a tale of loss and undying hope.
Admirable job! Keep up the exceptional work—congrats!
Book quality writing, right here. I was enthralled the entire time. Blind? Magic? Missing woman? Raven? Curses? Crossing realms? Psh. My kind of story.
'He withdrew a raven from his bag.' Okay, Top Story deserving...
This was awesome. Wish there was more! Congrats on the Top Story!
This was incredible!! I was hooked from the first sentence. Beautifully done. Congratulations on Top Story!!
Great take on the challenge and glad to see you back
Loved this
This is truly wonderful. I apologize for asking this on a story but i tried entering ..i did every requirement ex 250 words and in the fiction section....I even did the challenge enter now and EVERY time say not enough words..please help someone?
Very well done.
This story speaks to the fantastic. The mention of magic and the imagery of the raven on the pyre excite and delight. This is a superb piece. Kudos!
WOW! Very amazing work!!