forever secret
For Raymond G. Taylor's "Oh Jeff flash fiction challenge"
“Oh Jeff, I love you too… but... we have no choice. I'll clean up here as best I can, then leave. You dispose of the body where no one will ever find it. Then run, hide, start a new life and never look back."
"Farewell my love."
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Thank you,
Jason
47 words- All Dialogue.
For more information on Raymond G. Taylor's awesome unofficial challenge, you can read about it here:
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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Comments (20)
Please forgive the clumsy cut and paste. I would like to publish your entry (or entries) to the Oh-Jeff challenge in an upcoming book and of course need your permission to do so. Details are all here: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/oh-jeff-the-book%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thanks, Ray
Good grief, that escalated!
Wow… a plot twist in so few words 😵.
It's too late. The surveillance state was listening in. They're caught! In any event, well-wrought!
Nice work!
Oooo, that was dark hehehehehhe. Soooo awesomeeee!
This challenge is a good one and this is a great entry!
Great work, Jason! Both you and Cathy have laid out the gauntlet for the rest of us!
Whew! Lots of story there! Well done, JBaz!
Outstanding, Jason. An entire story and just 47 words, how amazing!
Terrific interpretation of the brief and so well executed (pun not intended) thanks for joining in
oh wow. That was really well done, J.
Truly excellent tale JBaz. Two thumbs up. 👍👍
great entry. loving these.
This is so cool, Jason! Loved it!
"Friends in low places" lol great job
Love a good micro fiction. Good job!
WOW! Very dark and creative and I enjoyed reading it.
Oh, boom! Jason. That's the kinda love we all dream of right? Someone willing to kill and someone willing to help with the clear up...haha. Loved this though. The dialogue was so tight and realistic and it just landed so well. Great entry, pal!
Brilliantly written 🏆