Familiar Faces
and red sneakers

Detective Xavier Perry bent over to check and re-check for the pulse on the young man that he had just shot, mistaking him for having a gun. Stunned to see only a cell phone in the right hand of a somewhat familiar face that he couldn't put a name to just yet. It was probably someone he had arrested before, he told himself. It was the shock and disbelief, the deep remorse of taking the life of an unarmed kid. A kid probably not even sixteen or seventeen. The kid with no pulse to be found.
He had called out for him to halt. He had chased three of the young men running from the scene of an armed house robbery. But this kid, up close, had earbuds in and the low hum of music could still be heard playing. Xavier's command for him to "STOP" must have caused him to turn around just quickly enough for him to catch the glimpse of a shiny metal from under the street light's path. All the officer of the last fourteen years could see in his mind on that late evening's shadowed memory, was "gun."
Xavier and his partner, Officer Chris Tompkins, had split paths when the suspects had parted in a different foot chase. Having had a rash of four home invasions in the middle of the night, they had been part of a team on stake out.
Now, a mass of "blue" surrounded him and his Captain was asking him for his gun. The coroner was going through the lifeless body for identification. A school photo from a local area high school tagged him now as one of their freshmen, fifteen year-old Zae Roberson. Soon they learned from the school's official the name of his parent to be notified. No priors.
News travels fast on the "streets" when one of their own has been "gunned down" by the police. Silent so often when giving information, but loud the other way around. Crowds gathered on the other side of the yellow ribbons that cordoned off the crime scene. All were anxious to know who was covered in the sheet that lay on the ground. Mothers whose child had not made it home, in the forefront.
That's when Xavier noticed her. Candace Roberson. She was still the beautiful girl he knew from his own high school years. Even now, his heart skipped a beat. His first love. The love that his parents disapproved of so deeply that they had moved him to another city so he could forget her.
Candace noticed him, too. And a silent old rage rose up in her throat. He had left without so much as a goodbye. But her attention was on the red sneakers sticking out from the sheet. And somehow she knew that the shoes she had bought for her son, she was now seeing. A blood curdling scream stopped all movement as she called out his name, "Zae!!!"
The "familiar" face was Xavier's son.
About the Creator
Shirley Belk
Mother, Nana, Sister, Cousin, & Aunt who recently retired. RN (Nursing Instructor) who loves to write stories to heal herself and reflect on all the silver linings she has been blessed with :)
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Outstanding
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (16)
Ohhh I did not expect that! Well done on placing π
Wow! Devastating! Police are too quick to react. This was a tough lesson for your character. Congrats on placing, Shirley! π€©
Great Story, and I will never look at red sneakers again in the same way. Well deserved win. Nicely Done!!!
Congratulations on your well deserved placing in the challenge.
Yowza, double whammy, Shirley! oooof in the gut! Great job and congratulations on the Runner Up award!! π₯³ π₯³ π₯³
Damn, that is a genuine shockwave ending. I love this. Powerful and really well-structured building up to that brilliant twist. Congrats on your prize! πππ
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ππππππ
Oh my word!! This is gut wrenching, Shirley!! Sorry I missed it, but so glad it received a well deserved win!
Wow! What a masterful weave :-) Great work
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Oooo I am excited. The first paragraph pulled me in. This was really good. It had me paying intense attention to every word, especially the names of the characters, and every line. I was hooked. What a tragedy. Well done for keeping me on the edge of my seat. Those red shoes were a great touch, I will remember this story every time I see one. ππ½β₯οΈπ€
Oh dear! So tragic. Brilliantly written!
Oh shit, it was not only Candace's son but Xavier's son too! I did not see this coming!
Not that is one gut-wrenching twist, Shirley! Really great storytelling and a reminder of every worst mother's fear!
Aw, shit
NOT a good day for Xavier indeed!! That was a shocker!