Eternal Fight of Good vs Evil
Who Wins? - A dark Russian kid humor Drabble
Two little girls were sitting on a roof of a three-story building, busy with a competition for target practice. They were throwing eggs at the pedestrians on the street.
One girl was very evil and the other girl was very good. They always had all sorts of competitions, trying to one-up each other.
So, this time they also competed in throwing eggs at the pedestrians. The evil girl threw ten eggs and hit three pedestrians with them. The good girl also threw ten eggs and hit six pedestrians precisely.
You know why? - Because the good always wins over the evil!
Author's note: This story was told by a five-year old participant of a Russian talent show for children. I was lucky to come across it on April Fool's Day.
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Lana V Lynx
Avid reader and occasional writer of satire and short fiction. For my own sanity and security, I write under a pen name. My books: Moscow Calling - 2017 and President & Psychiatrist
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Comments (14)
Lol... Nice lesson tucked in there. They better not tell there parents they wasted those eggs though, expensive little buggers, haha. Nice drabble!
Haha! How very clever! And very interesting source of origin? Highly creative and perceptive 5 year old
This is such a quirky and clever story!
Yayyy, Congrats on making the Leaderboard! 🎉🥳
Where is the good there again. Hitting more people be bad. Irony and fun. i am impressed that a five y/o told the story. Hope the child didn't take it to heart and think bad is good = good goes out the window.
hahahaha, this made me laugh! AND it is about EGGS too!! Great job, Lana.
HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHA!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I burst out laughing at the ending! That was brilliant and hilarious!
Ha ha, and it has a cool way of doing it. Love the ironic humour, Lana!
THese old proverbs and tales, still resonating today.
The good one must have been aiming for pol-egg-titions ;)
Cracking story Lana - egg-cited to see you're sticking with the egg theme! 😉 Seriously though, this was great. Well done.
Very interesting read. So much irony here.
What a cute story! Loved it
Lol! Cute story!