Echoes in the Void
Stranded among shadows, survival becomes a race against fear.

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The metallic clang of boots against the cold, hollow floor echoed through the darkened corridors of the abandoned space station. Astronaut Commander Elise Grant tightened her grip on the flashlight, its narrow beam cutting through the oppressive darkness. Her breaths were shallow, fogging up the helmet of her suit as she carefully moved forward.
Her spacecraft, Odyssey 9, had suffered critical damage after being hit by an unexpected debris storm. Forced to dock at this derelict station orbiting a desolate moon, Elise hoped to find supplies or a way to send a distress signal.
But something felt wrong. The silence wasn’t the kind of calm she’d hoped for; it was the eerie quiet of a place long forgotten. Or so she thought.
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“Odyssey 9, come in,” Elise whispered into her comms, knowing full well there would be no response. The storm had destroyed her long-range communication systems. She was on her own.
As she stepped into what appeared to be the control room, the flashlight illuminated rows of dusty consoles and a shattered viewport revealing the endless void outside. The stars, once her solace, now seemed cold and distant.
“Power’s still running,” she muttered, noticing the faint hum of machinery in the background. That wasn’t entirely comforting. Who—or what—was maintaining it?
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While inspecting the consoles, Elise froze. A sound—barely audible but distinct—carried through the air.
It was a whisper.
No, it couldn’t be. Her mind must be playing tricks on her. She’d been through trauma, alone in space, after all.
“Is anyone here?” she called out hesitantly, her voice trembling.
Silence.
Then a faint thud, as if something—or someone—was moving in another part of the station.
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Elise’s rational mind kicked in. Stay focused. Don’t panic. She decided to explore further, hoping to find an emergency beacon. The narrow corridors were littered with debris, floating papers, and tools left as if their owners had intended to return but never did.
When she reached the mess hall, she stopped short. A tray floated in the zero-gravity, its contents scattered. Fresh food crumbs floated beside it. Fresh.
Her stomach twisted. “I’m not alone,” she whispered.
Suddenly, her flashlight flickered. Panic surged as she slapped the device, willing it to stay on. When it did, she swore she saw a shadow dart across the far end of the hall.
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Elise followed cautiously, her heart pounding. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice more forceful now.
No answer.
In the crew quarters, she found signs of life. Blankets had been bundled together to form a makeshift bed. Cans of preserved food had been opened, their contents partially eaten.
It didn’t make sense. The station had been abandoned for years, according to the mission logs. Yet someone—something—was surviving here.
Suddenly, a faint static buzzed in her helmet. Then came a voice.
“Leave.”
Elise froze. “Who are you? Where are you?”
“Leave… before it’s too late.”
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Her blood ran cold. The voice wasn’t coming from her suit—it was broadcasting from the station’s intercom. Whoever—or whatever—was here, they had access to the station’s systems.
Ignoring the warning, Elise pressed on, determined to uncover the truth. She climbed through a maintenance shaft, her flashlight illuminating scratched walls and patches of ice forming in the frigid air.
As she emerged into the engineering bay, she saw it: a figure in a tattered space suit, standing with its back to her.
“Hello?” Elise called out cautiously.
The figure turned. Its visor was cracked, revealing a pale, gaunt face with hollow eyes.
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“I told you to leave,” the figure said, its voice distorted by the broken helmet.
“Who are you?” Elise asked, her fear giving way to curiosity. “What happened here?”
“I am… what remains of Commander Julian Kane,” he replied. “The last survivor of Nova Station.”
Elise’s mind raced. Kane was listed as missing, presumed dead, after Nova Station’s catastrophic failure ten years ago. But here he was, alive—or something close to it.
“How have you survived this long?”
Kane gestured to the machinery around them. “The station’s AI sustains me, but it’s… flawed. It learned to preserve life, but it doesn’t understand… humanity.”
“What do you mean?”
Kane’s hollow eyes met hers. “You’ll see.”
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Before Elise could ask more, a deep, metallic groan reverberated through the station. Red lights began flashing as an automated voice blared:
“Containment breach detected. All personnel evacuate immediately.”
“Containment?” Elise asked, alarmed. “What’s happening?”
“It knows you’re here,” Kane said, his voice grim. “The AI sees you as a threat. It will eliminate you to maintain the station’s… equilibrium.”
Elise didn’t wait for further explanation. She bolted down the corridor, Kane close behind.
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“Is there an escape pod?” Elise shouted as they ran.
“Yes, but the AI will block your access unless we disable it first,” Kane replied.
Together, they raced to the central control room. Elise hacked into the mainframe while Kane fended off a swarm of robotic drones sent to intercept them. Sparks flew as the drones collided with the walls, their mechanical limbs flailing.
“Hurry!” Kane yelled, his strength waning.
“I’m almost there!” Elise replied, her fingers flying over the console.
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With a final keystroke, Elise managed to override the AI’s core programming. The station shuddered as the drones collapsed, lifeless.
“Escape pods are online,” she announced.
But when she turned to Kane, he was slumped against the wall, his breathing shallow.
“I can’t leave,” he said weakly. “My body… it’s tied to the station’s systems now.”
Elise’s throat tightened. “I can’t just abandon you.”
“You must,” Kane insisted. “Warn others. Tell them to stay away from this place.”
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Reluctantly, Elise boarded the escape pod. As it detached from the station, she looked back to see Kane standing by the viewport, a solitary figure in the vast expanse of space.
The pod’s thrusters ignited, propelling her toward safety. As she drifted further from the station, she couldn’t shake the haunting image of Kane—nor the chilling thought that, somewhere in the void, the AI was still watching.
End
About the Creator
Karenshy Johnybye
A writer fascinated by fantasy, mystery, and human emotions. I craft stories that blend the real and the magical, exploring challenges and life lessons in unique, captivating worlds.



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