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Dr Knives (III)

Thursday 16th January 2025, Story #382

By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Dr Knives (III)
Photo by Jonathan Borba on Unsplash

The strap creaked tighter, and along a distant corridor, a door clanged.

The boy, if indeed he was a boy, flinched at the noise, but barely, because the leather bonds held him fast.

"Is there someone else here?" His voice sounded echoey and shrill in this bare room.

The lobotomist made reassuring noises without actually answering the question.

The lobotomist knew he was moving too quickly, but he couldn't risk this one disappearing, as these sort often did. Preyed on, one way or another. Dead maybe, or trafficked or else gone home to their families, or supported into housing... There were many ways young runaways could vanish. Did their peers worry overmuch about them, with so much bandwith gobbled up by survival?

This was his excuse for his own recklessness, and also now he comforted himself that no one would notice another one disappearing.

He'd given his name as Taylor. The lobotomist hadn't checked this. He didn't especially care.

He wondered, in a vague way, why a boy had chosen to put a pink streak in his hair. It was not the sort of thing men of his own generation were likely to do. Perhaps this was why Taylor was living rough. His father might have been angry and unaccepting of anything deviating even slightly from social norms.

Or maybe "Taylor" was actually a girl, but pretending to be a boy believing she would be less likely to experience assault. This hunch, when he gave it a half-hearted analysis, was not really anything to do with the colour in his hair. It was the slightest tilt toward girlishness in his features.

He'd seemed narrow and lean, with no hips, no curves... But this could have been youth and malnutrition.

He was sure the brain in there was an absolute mess. Trauma, rejection, confusion... And smack bang in the middle of pubescent restructuring, too. The lobotomist could hardly wait to get his teeth into this one.

He tested each buckle; Taylor could hardly move a half-inch. Next, he adjusted the contraption on his own head. With no assistant, he had to be extremely self-sufficient, and a single pair of hands was hardly enough. It also gave off suitable Doctor vibes, like the white coat. He hadn't been able to get all the stains out, but he still felt it lent him a certain gravitas.

The scrub-up of himself, the equipment, and the room was for the same reason, much more so than mere hygiene. A whiff of antiseptic and a white coat, and people devolved into putty. Obedient to a fault. You can't contradict a doctor.

"Aren't you going to, umm, put me to sleep or something?" Taylor asked, his voice shaking.

The lobotomist smiled, like a shark.

"Whatever for?"

snick snick

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    WHATEVER FOR? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    Well…reading this before bed was a mistake…

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I didn't think 'snick snick' could sound quite so terrifying and sinister. Oh god. Poor Taylor. You've got such a knack for drawing people into your stories.

  • Mother Combsabout a year ago

    As the addict said to his dealer, com'n just one more line! This is great! Can't wait for more!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Somebody needs to snick, snick the lobotomist!

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Love it! Can’t wait for the next part. Poor Taylor… maybe Taylor is secretly really important and that’s how the doctor gets caught… or maybe the doctor gets away with it and becomes famous for his “experimental new procedure!” Anyway, can’t wait to find out what happens next! ♥️ fan of this series! Thank you for writing!!!!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh dear. Poor Taylor. 😬

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