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Dave

A Story Every Day in 2024 Sept 30th 274/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read
Dave
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Dave ended the call. He was trying to process what Bethan had said. He wished he'd changed his number after the divorce. That woman. Always in the past...

He liked his new life. It was less...emotionally demanding. In fact, if he admitted it, it was a bit dull. His life living with Bethan before Laney's disappearance had been a juggling act but exciting. With Laney gone, Bethan's focus had been Laney's absence, to the detriment of everything else of which a marriage was made. He couldn't tell Bethan this because even to him, it sounded heartless, mean-spirited and selfish but once Laney had gone, Laney was gone. Nothing would change that.

He'd accepted Laney's loss more easily than Bethan. Yes, he wanted to know what had happened to her but Laney wasn't there, and he was grateful when the hole left by her shrank, when Life started to make its presence felt again and elbowed out Grief. Why Bethan held onto her sadness was beyond him. She needed to move on.

He had, in his whole other life.

Bethan could do that too but refused. It wasn't that hard really.

And now, this. A photo? Of three boys? What was that all about?

He shook his head and went to back to whatever he was doing. Then he stopped.

Three boys. Did Bethan mean Matthew, Luke and Mark? Had she been sent a photo of Laney's friends? They'd be young men now, wouldn't they? So was Bethan saying that she'd had a photo from back then? If so, where had it come from?

He thought back. Boys. Laney. In a flash, he remembered a day where she had been snapping her friends, kicking a stone on the street, trying to capture the boys in their rivalry and their energy. She loved that vintage camera. Took it everywhere with her.

"You never know, Dad, when a photo opportunity will come along."

Her words were recalled to him like a dart. He knew that Laney's camera was believed lost so to all intents and purposes, it was missing still. Unless...someone had found it and had developed the film from it.

But that couldn't be because he knew exactly where it was.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    I am impressed with how you went into his head, and really got to the heart of who is; and why he thought the way he did. From a place of logic, less emotional. Got it! But Dave… i just… don’t feel like I can… trust you anymore. Why do you know where the camera is… ♥️👌🏽👏🏽

  • J. L. Greenabout a year ago

    WTF Dave?!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Gripping!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    I'm glad I'm behind as it means I can binge. Dave is well written, chum! well done!

  • A. J. Schoenfeldabout a year ago

    I love how you let the tumult of Dave's thought process roll forward the plot.

  • Sorry… I’m playing catch up again 🥺… I agree with DK… Dave is well written… interesting that he knows exactly where the camera is/ was.🧐

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Ooooh!! Loved this one! Dave is a complex character!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    This is outstanding!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Oof. Come on! Totally invested in this series!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Interesting and new perspective to all of these ongoing events.

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    If he knows where it is, he must know what it contains. Sounds incriminating to me.

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    'Sup Rd - Seriously I have a list of your expressions and usage that I keep daily...as reference material re; your schtick. Added to my list is 'Shrank'..! But, as you say you have to read my schtick a few times, too. btw; in 'merica we 'kick the can' - stones tend to break the toes...! j-bud.in.l.a.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wait. What? Omg.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Whoa! What a cool twist! Another secret?

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    So Dave knew where the camera was. Curiouser and curiouser, Rachel.

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    A beguiling way of describing two forms of grieving but then to twist it and make us think that the father’s way of grieving has cracks in it that is now linked to knowing where the camera is. Very well crafted.

  • Whoaaaa, he knows where it is? He has it? But then, how? What's happening???? I need answersssss

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