Dave
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Dave ended the call. He was trying to process what Bethan had said. He wished he'd changed his number after the divorce. That woman. Always in the past...
He liked his new life. It was less...emotionally demanding. In fact, if he admitted it, it was a bit dull. His life living with Bethan before Laney's disappearance had been a juggling act but exciting. With Laney gone, Bethan's focus had been Laney's absence, to the detriment of everything else of which a marriage was made. He couldn't tell Bethan this because even to him, it sounded heartless, mean-spirited and selfish but once Laney had gone, Laney was gone. Nothing would change that.
He'd accepted Laney's loss more easily than Bethan. Yes, he wanted to know what had happened to her but Laney wasn't there, and he was grateful when the hole left by her shrank, when Life started to make its presence felt again and elbowed out Grief. Why Bethan held onto her sadness was beyond him. She needed to move on.
He had, in his whole other life.
Bethan could do that too but refused. It wasn't that hard really.
And now, this. A photo? Of three boys? What was that all about?
He shook his head and went to back to whatever he was doing. Then he stopped.
Three boys. Did Bethan mean Matthew, Luke and Mark? Had she been sent a photo of Laney's friends? They'd be young men now, wouldn't they? So was Bethan saying that she'd had a photo from back then? If so, where had it come from?
He thought back. Boys. Laney. In a flash, he remembered a day where she had been snapping her friends, kicking a stone on the street, trying to capture the boys in their rivalry and their energy. She loved that vintage camera. Took it everywhere with her.
"You never know, Dad, when a photo opportunity will come along."
Her words were recalled to him like a dart. He knew that Laney's camera was believed lost so to all intents and purposes, it was missing still. Unless...someone had found it and had developed the film from it.
But that couldn't be because he knew exactly where it was.
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Comments (18)
I am impressed with how you went into his head, and really got to the heart of who is; and why he thought the way he did. From a place of logic, less emotional. Got it! But Dave… i just… don’t feel like I can… trust you anymore. Why do you know where the camera is… ♥️👌🏽👏🏽
WTF Dave?!
Gripping!
I'm glad I'm behind as it means I can binge. Dave is well written, chum! well done!
I love how you let the tumult of Dave's thought process roll forward the plot.
Sorry… I’m playing catch up again 🥺… I agree with DK… Dave is well written… interesting that he knows exactly where the camera is/ was.🧐
Ooooh!! Loved this one! Dave is a complex character!
This is outstanding!
And the plot thickens once more!!! 😳
Oof. Come on! Totally invested in this series!
Interesting and new perspective to all of these ongoing events.
If he knows where it is, he must know what it contains. Sounds incriminating to me.
'Sup Rd - Seriously I have a list of your expressions and usage that I keep daily...as reference material re; your schtick. Added to my list is 'Shrank'..! But, as you say you have to read my schtick a few times, too. btw; in 'merica we 'kick the can' - stones tend to break the toes...! j-bud.in.l.a.
Wait. What? Omg.
Whoa! What a cool twist! Another secret?
So Dave knew where the camera was. Curiouser and curiouser, Rachel.
A beguiling way of describing two forms of grieving but then to twist it and make us think that the father’s way of grieving has cracks in it that is now linked to knowing where the camera is. Very well crafted.
Whoaaaa, he knows where it is? He has it? But then, how? What's happening???? I need answersssss