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Coffee: a beginning

A lone horseman, picking his way through the mountains, is offered a steaming cup of a drink he has never before tasted

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Photo: V.Derounian / Wikimedia Commons

Ahmed al-Ghaffar leant forward, straining to see the path, as the stallion picked its way between the treacherous rocks. The horse was jittery, as was he, knowing there could be brigands waiting around any corner.

They were surprised, not by robbers, but by none other than the outcast Sheikh Omar, as he liked to call himself, concealed in a cave.

“Come Effendi, I have something for you.”

Al-Ghaffar sniffed the strange, dark liquid, a bitter scent rising with the steam. He took a gulp then spat into the fire, which hissed in protest.

“You trying to poison me, filthy dog?”

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 5 months ago

    That is funny , excellent story

  • You left out his fit of "coughing".

  • Sandy Gillman8 months ago

    Haha! Love the ending!

  • Hahahahahahahahahaha omggg that ending! Hilarious! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    It's just like I was there, great story!

  • Lynn Anderson 3 years ago

    He just needed a spot of cream is all.

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Great short! Love this one!

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