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Beneath Darkness

A Spelunker’s Terrifying Journey into Black Hollow Cave

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 4 min read
Beneath Darkness
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Shrouded in mystery, Hollow Creek was a town where rolling hills and thick trees hid mysteries from the outside world. Among these secrets was Black Hollow Cave, a massive entrance in the earth long hidden for eons by rumored tales and ominous looks. For years the locals warned tourists to stay away from this cave, but many strangers were drawn in by its allure.

As someone with a bold spirit and a taste for danger, Jake dismissed the stories as made-up mythology. Seeking adventure and fresh challenges to overcome, he set his sights on Black Hollow Cave, resolved to explore its shadowy corners and reveal any secrets concealed therein.

One clear fall morning, Jake set out on his trek with a rope-secured supply of food and a reliable lantern. A dark shadow appeared at the cave's entrance, as if warning Jake not to go any farther. Still, he did not panic and inhaled deeply as he entered the interior darkness.

The cave's aperture was first unremarkable because it barely extended a few hundred feet. The grotto surrounded Jake with damp, cold air and displayed stalactites and stalagmites. With his headlight light illuminating the way, he ventured deeper into the shadows, enjoying the sight of each tastefully carved rock formation as he advanced toward unknown waters within.

Jake continued to move through the complex system of tunnels for hours at a time. He descended farther to a lower level, where quiet weighed heavier and heavier on him. The entire cave system was enveloped in an eerie quiet, as if everything was waiting for something that was about to happen. The air temperature dropped.

Jake suddenly stopped dead in his tracks as his headlamp dimmed. Gently tapping the bulb, he tried to salvage anything from the situation, praying it was just a small connectivity glitch. After such a short interruption, he was unable to get rid of the unpleasant feeling even if he was able to temporarily stabilize the beam. Jake pressed on in spite of this inner conflict, but as time passed, it seemed as though the darkness was swallowing up whatever light his lamp was producing, consuming more and more of the scene with each stride he took into its menacing depths.

Jake's headlamp flickered again as he made his way across the small space and came to a narrow path that led to a large chamber. He felt terror take hold of him, but he pressed forward, determined to gain entrance into the vast area beyond. Jake was in complete amazement when he eventually managed to escape the cramped space and emerge in front of what was waiting for him.

The room seemed enormous, with tall walls that seemed to go on forever. The floor beneath was dusted with fine white dust that gave off a faint glow in the light. In the middle of it all stood an old stone altar with strange symbols and marks on it.

Jake was uneasy as he drew closer to the altar, and his steps wavered. The once-warm air grew cold, and there was a barely audible whisper in the distance. The words were unclear, but they carried feelings, too; they were clear tones full of rage and agony.

Jake looked into the altar despite the murmurs. He did not recognize its symbols and could not interpret their meaning. He reached for the stone, but as soon as his fingers touched it, a piercing pain shot through them.

With his palm clenched and his eyes wide with terror, he staggered back towards the altar. The room was filled with the cacophony of voices as the urgent whispers became louder. Jake's headlamp flashed erratically, creating uneven shadows on the walls.

Jake's only chance of getting away was to run for the narrow passage. The whispers came after him, louder and more frantic. His headlamp abruptly went out, plunging Jake into complete darkness.

Jake staggered along the narrow corridor, bewildered and with poor visibility. A cacophony of voices, all around him, roaring and screeching in a language he did not understand, made his heart race. Jake screamed in terror as he suddenly cringed at the feeling of something cold brushing against his arm.

Breathless, Jake battled his way through the shadows and came out of the tunnel. Terrified, his mind racing, he ran blindly down the tunnels. The murmurs continued unabated, ringing in his ears and driving him dangerously close to insanity.

Jake felt as though he had been racing for all of eternity as he dashed towards a dim light up ahead. His only goal was to get away from the voices and darkness that bothered him. At last, Jake emerged from the cave into sunshine, and he fell to the ground, gasping for air.

The voices stopped, and he fell silent in shock. He turned to face Black Hollow Cave once more, but this time he knew he would never return because the entrance had turned into a menacing black hole. The encounter deeply and profoundly shook him.

The people of Hollow Creek had always warned outsiders about the cave, their voices full of respect and fear for what was below. Following Jake's tragedy, it was turned into another piece of whispered history, a warning about the horrors that lurk in the depths, waiting for some bold or foolish adventurer to discover them.

Horror

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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