Beauty and the Beast
Wednesday 7th August, Story #220/366
The girl looks dangerously thin. When they lift her to carry her off the stage, the gurney jerks upward.
The mother climbs into the back of the ambulance. You can tell she's the mother. They look a lot alike, although she probably prefers people to mistake her for an older sister.
The paramedic spares her a look, weighing the pros and cons of allowing her to ride in the back. Will she get in the way if it all goes sideways...? It's fine. The kid needs a parent. In any case, this one has an air about her of one who won't be told No.
They really do look similar. Not just their features... They share a sort of hollow look. Something about the way the style of their hair and clothes. The mother's outfit looks like it has been chosen, if possible, with even more care than the girl's elegant dress. It's as if a tightrope has been trod: nothing must outshine her little star, but also, she couldn't bear to be outshone herself.
The paramedic asks her questions. She mumbles evasively. He presses her:
"Ms. Holdsworth, when did Kelsey last eat?"
Her eyes shift side-to-side, grip tightening on the tiara in her right hand.
"I'm not sure," she says at last, setting it on the painstakingly blow-dried tresses. "I was helping her get ready for the pageant... I..." The tiara slips, and she goes back to holding it awkwardly. It's glint holds her attention as much as the girl does.
The paramedic takes it, and she whips round, steely eyes boring into him, all focus.
"Give it back!"
"Answer the questions, Ms Holdsworth. It's very important."
She softens a little. "OK, fine," she snaps. "Ask."
The paramedic asks his questions. She drops her gaze, and her fingers creep to the sash, rubbing it like a security blanket.
She's been starving her, and pushing her to work out excessively. It's like anorexia nervosa meets munchausen by proxy...
"Ms. Holdsworth? I just need you to sit here a moment..." He steers her with authority into the correct position.
Door opened, one hard shove, and he watches with satisfaction as her tumbling shape gets smaller and smaller.
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Word count excluding note: 366
Submitted on Wednesday 7th August at 17.01
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Comments (17)
I did not see the ending happening but...I admit, it put a smile on my face. Great job!
Love the ending. Mom belongs in jail!
If only things like this didn't actually happen. Well done LC, I liked this version of Justice that you have written.
Somehow... I did not see that coming but man was that justified!! Great pro LC!!
Oh wow! What a great ending, I must say. Loved your story.
THis was just an exercise in personal gratification wasnt it!
Hahahahhahahhahahaa she deserved that!
Hahahahhahahhahahaa she deserved that!
So sad that parents do that to their kids. Like they have to live their dreams through their kids and force them at all costs
I often think I’d struggle to be kind to people who put others through such misery. This was such a just ending. Great story - great writing.
Oh! Great ending.
Ooff, you are a master of twisted endings, LC!
ooo this one made me feel gross but damn let's go Paramedic!
I wondered who the beast was and didn't see it coming! It's a pity a paramedic wouldn't be able to do that shove in real life.
Nice Idea conveying. Thanks LC
Wow ❗ you wrote such a deep story in a short amount of words excellent
well written