Arboreal Fire
A micro-fiction for an unofficial, friendly challenge using Unsplash
The cool crisp breeze tussles my hair. The forest blazes in arboreal fire, blood-red crimson and resplendent gold litters the canopy and the earth. Here in this sylvan bliss, I am most at peace.
Water rushes softly beneath me. The wooden slats of the bridge creak in feigning protest as I walk to the apex of its arch. I tug my flannel back over my shoulders, pull up my sleeves, and crouch down. I let my two first fingers gently caress the cold mountain stream.
I close my eyes and let the welcome bite of wind and cold gnaw futilely on my hardened skin. Autumn is the most serene of infernos.
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I hope you enjoyed this tiny written portrait. The micro-fiction itself was born largely from my love of nature and my home state of New Hampshire, renowned for its landscape and autumn foliage. Besides, autumn is my favorite season (largely due to stable-ish temperatures, less pollen, and Halloween).
I must of course thank my friend Ashley Lima for this challenge. What you must do is type your first name into the Unsplash generator and turn one of the first resulting images into a story, now how exactly that story takes shape (Short story, verse, etc.) is up to you. Now, back to the old grindstone for me!
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Comments (21)
Superb vignette! I can feel the weather through the screen
Just lovely. Congrats on the top story
Congratulations on your Top Storyπ
Freshly written ππβ€οΈπ―β
So descriptive and beautiful!!
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This was so poetically magnificent! So mesmerising and beautiful! Congratulations on your Top Story!
TS!
Nicely done!
Very descriptive, good job
Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Absolutely stunning π€© wow!!! You have a new Subscription from me and a big β€οΈ I adored your intense and vivid imagery and word usage here!!
Ahhhh so beautiful, Ian!! Total mood right there.
Lovely, and welcome back!
Great story. I love autumn. Beautiful time of year. Congrats
Aye! There you go Ian, congrats on TS :D
Great work! Love New Hampshire and it certainly looks fantastic in fall.
So very well done. Your descriptions are perfectly done.
Lovely and loving it!!!
I'm going to have to try this challenge. Loved your prose and imagery in this one, Ian!
So aw some that the image was something you love. Won't be long now until the leaves change. Great micro!
This is so wonderful! What a lucky image. Well done, my friend :)