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Arboreal Fire

A micro-fiction for an unofficial, friendly challenge using Unsplash

By Ian ReadPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - July 2023
Arboreal Fire
Photo by kevin Xue on Unsplash

The cool crisp breeze tussles my hair. The forest blazes in arboreal fire, blood-red crimson and resplendent gold litters the canopy and the earth. Here in this sylvan bliss, I am most at peace.

Water rushes softly beneath me. The wooden slats of the bridge creak in feigning protest as I walk to the apex of its arch. I tug my flannel back over my shoulders, pull up my sleeves, and crouch down. I let my two first fingers gently caress the cold mountain stream.

I close my eyes and let the welcome bite of wind and cold gnaw futilely on my hardened skin. Autumn is the most serene of infernos.

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I hope you enjoyed this tiny written portrait. The micro-fiction itself was born largely from my love of nature and my home state of New Hampshire, renowned for its landscape and autumn foliage. Besides, autumn is my favorite season (largely due to stable-ish temperatures, less pollen, and Halloween).

I must of course thank my friend Ashley Lima for this challenge. What you must do is type your first name into the Unsplash generator and turn one of the first resulting images into a story, now how exactly that story takes shape (Short story, verse, etc.) is up to you. Now, back to the old grindstone for me!

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About the Creator

Ian Read

I am an archaeologist, bookwyrm, and story-teller from New Hampshire.

Serial Fiction, Short Stories, and Poetry in diverse genres with a penchant for dark fiction and whimsical fantasy.

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  • Harbor Benassa2 years ago

    Superb vignette! I can feel the weather through the screen

  • Just lovely. Congrats on the top story

  • Congratulations on your Top StoryπŸŽ‰

  • Freshly written πŸ“πŸ˜‰β€οΈπŸ’―β—

  • Joelle E N2 years ago

    So descriptive and beautiful!!

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  • This was so poetically magnificent! So mesmerising and beautiful! Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Article Pins2 years ago

    TS!

  • Very descriptive, good job

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Beautifully written. Congratulations!

  • Absolutely stunning 🀩 wow!!! You have a new Subscription from me and a big ❀️ I adored your intense and vivid imagery and word usage here!!

  • Donna Renee2 years ago

    Ahhhh so beautiful, Ian!! Total mood right there.

  • Judey Kalchik 2 years ago

    Lovely, and welcome back!

  • RP2 years ago

    Great story. I love autumn. Beautiful time of year. Congrats

  • Ashley Lima2 years ago

    Aye! There you go Ian, congrats on TS :D

  • Matthew J. Fromm2 years ago

    Great work! Love New Hampshire and it certainly looks fantastic in fall.

  • Gerald Holmes2 years ago

    So very well done. Your descriptions are perfectly done.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Lovely and loving it!!!

  • Amanda Starks2 years ago

    I'm going to have to try this challenge. Loved your prose and imagery in this one, Ian!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    So aw some that the image was something you love. Won't be long now until the leaves change. Great micro!

  • Ashley Lima2 years ago

    This is so wonderful! What a lucky image. Well done, my friend :)

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