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Adanne The fat girl with bad odor

Adanne the girl on fleer.

By TellerPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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There was once a small village nestled in vibrant green hills and farms. Princess Lila lived in this quaint community with her father, King Hadrian, as its benevolent ruler. Lila was known throughout the kingdom for her kind heart and generosity.

From a young age however, Lila struggled with a nasty body odor that seemed to follow her no matter how much she bathed. As she grew into a young woman, the scent only intensified, pushing others to avoid her. Former friends turned away in embarrassment and suitors fled at the slightest whiff.

Lila's loneliness grew until she barely left the palace. One summer day, drawn by joyful music and laughter, Lila glimpsed a village festival from her tower window. Summoning her courage, she slipped outside, hoping the festivities would lend camouflage to her odor. But a sudden breeze soon betrayed her, sending revelers scrambling in disgust.

Heartbroken, Lila fled into the woods to weep in solace. That's when she encountered a kindly musician named Malik, who soothed her tears with gentle words and cheerful melodies. Unlike others, Malik seemed unfazed by Lila's condition, seeing only her kind spirit. As they talked, Lila felt truly seen for the first time.

From then on, Lila and Malik's daily meetings became the highlight of her life. Through long conversations and his spirited playing, Malik brought Lila joy unlike any other. Best of all, in his company she forgot her insecurity, losing herself in exuberant dances. Over time, their friendship blossomed into deep affection.

Yet just as Malik proposed, a deadly plague engulfed the region. Stricken with fever, Lila fought for her life in isolation. Miraculously she survived, but emerged transformed - her body odor vanished along with the illness.

As quarantines lifted, Lila reentered society to find the people's perceptions changed. Where once were sneers, now she saw only admiration. Suitors flocked with proposals, though Lila's heart still clung to Malik. But when they reunited, had her new status driven a permanent wedge between them?hill

Fan FictionFantasyMicrofictionShort StoryYoung Adult

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Teller

Ever wondered about African folktales? Dive into a world of enchanting characters, captivating stories, and timeless wisdom. African folklore is more than entertainment - it's a journey through diverse landscapes, mythical creatures.

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