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A Night, a Choice, and a Late Call: The Dark Chronicles of a Regret

Sunset: A Red Silence and a Broken Heart

By alin butucPublished 5 months ago 8 min read
A Night, a Choice, and a Late Call: The Dark Chronicles of a Regret
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The sun, a sphere of red-bloody fire, slowly sank behind the horizon, casting a blast of orange light over the dirty windows of the seventh-floor apartment. From the window, Alin watched the city, a maze of concrete and lights, as it prepared to put on its cloak of darkness. But the darkness that was descending into his soul was deeper, colder, more final than any night.

Just a few hours ago, an icy silence had settled between him and Cristina. It was not a silence of peace, but of a finished war, of capitulation. A silence that followed an exhausting confrontation, full of sharp words, spoken with the intention of hurting, of leaving scars.

"I can't do this anymore, Alin," was the last thing Cristina had said to him. "I'm tired of being lonely with two people."

On the coffee table, as an undeniable proof of the end, stood two objects: a key to the apartment and a crumpled list. The list had been her idea, at first, a kind of sad game they had initiated a long time ago. It was called "The List of What We Couldn't Do Together." On it, Cristina had noted with an elegant calligraphy, as if from another era, all those dreams that, for various reasons, had remained unfulfilled. A honeymoon in Provence, a country house with a garden full of roses, a cat they had wanted for years but had never gotten because of arguments about who would feed it.

"This list is not about what we missed," she had told him one day, "but about a future we will no longer have."

Alin read the title again. He laughed bitterly. Now, the list was definitive. It was an epitaph to their love. Under it, the key. A small piece of metal, which symbolized everything that had been and everything that would no longer be. When she left, she had only said to him: "I'll call you. When I'm ready."

But the sun had set. And she hadn't called.

The Beginning of the Night: Ghosts in the Walls (9:00 PM – 11:00 PM)

In the darkness, the apartment became a gallery of ghosts. Every object, every corner of the room, was a painful reminder of her presence. The velvet sofa, where they watched movies. The reading lamp, under which she sat with a book in her hand. A photograph on the nightstand, of the two of them, smiling happily at a wedding, years ago. An image of another life. An image of other people.

Alin tried to convince himself that it was all just a nightmare, an exaggerated drama, like all the others. He remembered their first serious argument. They were 22 years old and he had forgotten her birthday. Cristina had cried, and he, a clumsy teenager, didn't know how to react. Finally, he had bought a bouquet of flowers and apologized. They had been fine. As always. This time, however, there was no flower that could solve everything. The break was deep.

He took the phone in his hand, heavy as a stone. His fingers trembled above her number, but he didn't dial it. He waited, like a stubborn child, for her to make the first move. For her to give in. He waited for a chance, a minimal chance, to still be able to fix what had been broken. But he wasn't the hero. He wasn't the one who had to save her. He was the one who had to save their love.

Finally, a cold and sharp thought pierced his mind. Maybe she won't call. Maybe this was it. A battle of egos, lost in silence. In the middle of the apartment, under the dim light of the lampshade, Alin felt a visceral loneliness, a loneliness that was freezing his bones. He took a glass, poured some whiskey, and listened to the silence, a silence that seemed to have a thousand voices. Voices that reminded him of all his mistakes.

Midnight: A Mirror of Regrets (00:00 – 02:00)

Alin wandered through the house, like a haunted ghost. He stopped in front of the bathroom mirror. His face, tired, with deep dark circles under his eyes, was no longer the face of the optimistic young man who had met Cristina years ago. It was the face of a beaten man, wounded by his own mistakes.

He remembered the last few months. The frequent and violent arguments, starting from nothing. A glass left on the table, a sound that was too loud on the television, a cold dinner. Now, when he thought about it, they were such small, insignificant details that he wondered how they had allowed them to destroy their lives. But it wasn't about the glass. It was about accumulated frustrations, about a lack of communication, about a love that was slowly suffocating, under the pressure of a killing routine.

He picked up the phone. He wiped the dust off it. He opened the contacts. He looked at her name. Cristina (My heart). That's how he had saved her. They had both laughed. "How romantic, Alin!" she had said to him, with a voice full of affection. "It's a cliché, but I like it."

Now, that name was a monument to his failure. An epitaph. He decided to call her. His pride, a poison that had kept him in place, had melted under the pressure of pain. He wanted to tell her he loved her, that he wanted her back, that without her, his world was chaos.

He dialed the number. He heard his heart beating in his chest, like a war drum. He waited. It rang once. Twice. Three times. Each time, he felt like he was hearing a door closing. A door to a life that was moving away from him. No one answered.

Alin felt the ground give way under his feet. He threw the phone on the sofa. It was too late. No matter how much he wanted to call her, no matter how much he would have fought for her, now it was too late.

The Hours of Silence: A Guarantee of Destiny (02:00 – 05:00)

The hours passed meaninglessly. Alin wandered through the apartment. He stopped in the living room, where on the coffee table, under the crumpled list, sat a small note. A note that Cristina had left. It wasn't a farewell note. It was a love note. A note of hope.

"Alin, I'm going to get some air. To calm down. I'll be back. I promise."

Alin felt sick. A wave of nausea, of panic. She hadn't left. She was coming back. She was forgiving him. He, in his stupidity and pride, had thought she was gone forever. But she was coming back.

He grabbed the phone. He called her again. She didn't answer. He sent a message. "Cristina, I love you. Please, come home."

Nothing.

He felt a pit in his stomach. A cold fear gripped his soul. Where was she? Why wasn't she answering? He thought of all the places she could be. At her parents' house. At her best friend's, Maria. He called Maria. A sleepy voice answered him: "Alin? It's 4 AM. What happened?"

"Cristina... is she with you?"

"No, she's not. She called a few hours ago. She was crying. She said she wanted to come to you, to make up, to tell you she loved you."

Alin felt a cold shiver down his spine. He fell silent. Then, he hung up. He understood.

He went to the computer. He opened a local news site. He found nothing. He opened another one. Nothing. He opened the online newspaper. In the "Serious accidents" section, there was a photograph. A small, red car, smashed. An accident on a highway, at 3 AM. A woman, not yet identified, had been taken to the hospital.

"No, no, no," Alin whispered. "It can't be her."

He took the key, took the phone, and went out the door. He ran down the stairs, went down seven floors, jumped in his car, and left. He sped down the deserted streets, his heart pounding in his chest. He arrived at the hospital, at the emergency room. He went in, he asked. "An accident... a red car. A woman."

The nurse looked at the files. "Yes. An accident on the highway. A patient arrived a few hours ago."

"How... how is she?" he asked, his voice trembling.

The nurse looked at him with sad pity. "I'm sorry. It was... too late."

The words fell like stones. Alin felt his world darken. He heard nothing, he saw nothing. It was too late. To save her. To tell her he loved her. To hold her in his arms, one last time.

Sunrise: A Light that No Longer Gathers Anything

The sunrise came, but for Alin, the world remained in darkness. He received a phone call while sitting on a bench in front of the hospital. An official voice confirmed it. She was hit by a car while trying to cross a highway. A car that hit her, and she died instantly.

Before she died, a voice said a single phrase: "It was... too late."

Alin went back into the hospital. He asked to see her. She was lying on a bed, covered with a white sheet. He took her hand. Her hand was cold. He left on the table, next to her glasses, a white rose, bought from a 24-hour flower shop. A rose, a symbol of pure love, placed next to a phone that rang too late.

He left, with an empty soul, with an open wound, with a pain he would never be able to heal. He left, knowing that that night, a night when he had a thousand chances to save her, would remain, forever, in his memory, as the longest, most painful, and latest night.

Epilogue: A Legacy of Regrets

Years passed. Alin remained alone. Her key, the apartment key, remained on the coffee table. Placed next to a photograph of her, in which she smiled, happy, under the scorching sun of Greece. He could no longer move his things. Every object, every corner of the room, was a monument to their love, a tomb of his regrets.

One day, he received a package. It was a small box, with a sender's address he didn't recognize. Inside, a journal. Cristina's.

He started to read it. And he read about a love, her love, that burned with a fantastic intensity. He read about their happy moments, about their laughter, about their vacations. And he read about her unhappiness. About her loneliness, about her frustrations. About how he, Alin, had shut himself off, about how he loved her, but didn't tell her.

The last page was blank. Just one word, written with an elegant black pen. A word she could no longer write. "Love."

Alin knew then that that night had not been just his. It had been hers too. A night in which both of them, from two different places, fought for a love that, in the end, defeated them both. She fought, until the last second.

And the phone that rang too late was not just a tragic coincidence. It was a testament to a lost love, a chronicle of a choice that could not be undone. A story of a sunset that never had a sunrise.

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About the Creator

alin butuc

I am a passionate writer of stories and books. I explore the human soul, from deep psychological thrillers to heartfelt romance. Join me on a journey through words and discover a world of memorable characters and powerful emotions.

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