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A BlackBerry, who killed me.

A BlackBerry, how beautiful and how sweet it looks, but how awesome is its ability to turn a love story into a revenge story.she turned in my enemy who thirsty for my blood

By Sougata chowdhuryPublished 4 years ago 4 min read
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Peter-Peter, the rain has just begun, the ground has begun to tremble with lightning.  Buff! -Waff! -The dog ran in front of me and entered the room.  The long shawl in the dense forest next to it, the banyan tree has grown so big that I felt as if their twigs were rushing towards me and saying- go!  Go!  ... get away from here.  Ignoring the trees, I started walking. Just two feet away, he suddenly stood in front of me, grabbed my shirt collar, and said, 'I won't let you in,'  in a loud voice. 


 When I heard this, I got angry and just as I was about to punch him in the nose, someone came out of the room. She is running towards the forest like crazy.  Her eyes and face turned red, and a large pebble from the street fell under her shoes.  A ....- As soon as he screamed, I went at lightning speed and grabbed his waist tightly with both hands. She turned his head in anger and looked at me.  I looked at her with soft eyes, how beautiful she looks.  Arnoldo on the other hand said let him go, let him go.  


Ah!  ... she hit me hard in the middle of the chest and pushed me away.  What are you doing  My chest hurt a lot.  Well done! If you ever try to come to me, it won't be a good thing for you.  Ignoring our ban, she started walking towards the forest.  Brother, let's go inside and see if Julie is in good health.  


You go, I'm coming - saying this, I looked back once in illusion eyes.  Khach!  Khach!  - I came to the door and stood and The colour of the door has turned into a mix of black and yellow.The door slammed open with a slight push, and I am so terrified to see the door open.Knowing that Julie is not safe, Arnoldo opened the door and left and also The lock is down too.


Seeing all this, my head started spinning. I somehow hurriedly entered the room.  From then on my hands started shaking.  In this position, I grabbed the lock tightly with 5 fingers.  Oops ... the nail stuck on the wooden floor hit my leg like a needle and it felt like my foot is about to burst open.  What happened Nick?  - Arnoldo asked.  


What!  Hey, let's go home, then I'm talking in front of Julian, Julie's bedroom on the right, a staircase-shaped staircase on the left.  We entered the room on the right.  As soon as I entered, I saw the oil painting in front of me. Just then, Julie said, "Hey, Nick, what are you looking at? Come here, sit here, come here."  Yes, I'm coming.  Yes, I'm coming.  We started talking.Then what is the news about the stain on the elbow Julie, the skin is not burning?  - I asked.  


No, no, new skin has come up, no more burning - said Julie. This time I asked Arnaldo out loud - first tell me do you love Julie at all?  Or do you always act?  Brother, why are you saying that?  I fed Julie a little while ago so she wouldn't have to suffer and you say that I don't love her? - he asked me with his red-faced.


I think you don't know what happened to this family when the front door of this old house was first opened, and I don't think you can open it by mistake!  - I sighed and told Arnoldo.  He apologized and said I was sorry.  


What are you doing?  Do you want to finish everything in one moment?  - asked Julie, tears welling up in her eyes, sorry for Arnoldo.  No, believe me, I didn't really open the door knowingly, Julie, I swear to God.  Okay, okay, a lot has happened.  Ha !, Ha !, - I laughed at their naughty-sweet fight.  


I'll go upstairs and you'll sit here and talk, okay?  - I asked.  Go, I will not stop you!  - The answer came from Julie in a silent voice.  Arnoldo is staring at me.  When I left the house, the sound of my feet on the wooden floor is very unfamiliar.  I grabbed the wooden handle and slowly climbed up.  


Upstairs there is only one bedroom, Julian's bedroom.  Aha!.. I got a head injury while entering the house.  I feel very calm, I feel like I'm back in life like before.  The buzz! buzz! is a dirty bulb burning.  A few months ago, her clothes were neatly arranged, but today they are tidy in bed.  


The only thing that hasn't changed is the beautiful smell of Julian's skin, the smell of sandalwood.  After many days of getting this smell, my mind was filled with a strange joy. Ah!  Julian screamed out the window.  Maybe no one downstairs has heard the sound yet.  


Julie, Arnoldo got up quickly - I called through the window.  Why what?  - They both asked me.  I threatened them.  Arnold and Julie rushed upstairs with a half-broken bamboo stick, they thought maybe I was scared to see a BlackBerry in the house like before.Come on, let's peek out the window and see what happened, the three of us saw Julian running together, Like crazy through the jungle.


Her hair was messy, her clothes were torn, her eyes were as scared as before.Without seeing the rest, I ran to the forest, First I climbed down the stairs from Julie's house with an old broken pipe rod, and Julie and Arnoldo followed me.Don't be afraid, Julian.  Don't be afraid, Julien, I'm coming- I kept reassuring Julien out loud.


  As we approached the forest, footsteps are heard from the northeast, and Julien is found half-dead under a banyan tree a short distance away, her eyes red.  Somehow Arnoldo and I grabbed her and gently lifted her, leaning on our shoulders, her breathing became so fast that we could hear her breathing clearly.

Last word:-

If only I could kill him...

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2nd part will come very soon don't worry..😈..😄..

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