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Story Disobedient_Feeling Part 1

Disobedient_Feeling Part 1

By MOHAMMED FARHADPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
Story Disobedient_Feeling Part 1
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I was dancing towards my room when I suddenly felt a pull on my hand as soon as I reached the front of the room --

The person in front of me hugged me with both his arms.

His rapid breathing showed his anxiety.

Before I could realize the suddenness of the incident, a pair of lips pressed a deep kiss on my lips.

When I realized what was happening to me, I pushed the person in front of me with all my strength. I heard the sound of some glass breaking but without paying attention, I ran to my mother's room. The speed of running was so high that everyone was looking at me. I was so scared that my hands and feet were shaking.

Today, my only elder sister Rimi was yellow. I was going to my room to freshen up after finishing the program downstairs when this incident happened.

Seeing me running like this, my brother and mother quickly came to me. I gasped when I saw this.

My brother asked what happened. Brother, there is someone in my room. Brother was surprised and said that no one goes to your room anyway, you don't like that either, who will be there now. What are you talking about, come and see.

I followed my mother and brother to my room.

Brother entered then turned on the light and called me. When my mother and I entered the room, I saw the glass table lamp lying on the floor in pieces. Brother said that I saw what happened. If someone entered, would they break it and leave it?

Maybe a cat entered and it also broke.

Now how do I tell my brother what happened to me? So I kept quiet.

Brother called Rahima aunt to clean these things. My mother asked me to freshen up and brother also left.

I am standing in the room stunned, what happened to me a while ago. I can't forget it.

In the midst of my thoughts, Rahima aunt screamed blood. I looked and saw that there was indeed blood in the glass, and not a lot of it. Rahima aunt said, "I think the cat is in a little too much pain."

I couldn't take it anymore, I went to freshen up. I was standing in front of the mirror drying my hair and wondering who dared to touch my hair and be so rude. Without finding any outlet for my thoughts, I thought about going to sleep because I had a lot of work to do tomorrow, such as a wedding.

Just as I was about to go to bed, someone knocked on my door and called me - Mimi, Mimi, are you asleep or not?

I opened the door and saw Abhi Bhai (my brother Mahin's friend).

What happened, brother, do you need anything?

No, not really, your brother was saying that he wanted to take the charger from you because my phone wasn't charging with your brother's charger.

Oh wait, I'll give it to you.

Suddenly, Abhi Bhai said, "Why are you being so rude, Mimi? You didn't even ask me to sit down." Before I could say anything, he grabbed the charger from my hand and said, "I will remember everything." I went to sleep.

I left all this behind and went to sleep.

I woke up in the morning and saw that it was 9 o'clock. I have been sleeping for so long, I think, God will scold me. I was about to get out of bed and was shocked again. There were flowers all over my bed. There was a note with my favorite KitKat chocolate next to the pillow.

I was in extreme shock, what was happening to me?

I took the note with my bare hands. But I didn't dare to open it.

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About the Creator

MOHAMMED FARHAD

I write poetry for the weary, the searching, the silently recovering. Come stay a while.

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