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Second Chance Love

The One Who Stayed

By The Manatwal KhanPublished 9 months ago 4 min read

The first snow of December dusted the streets of Camden like powdered sugar. The little bookstore on Maple Street had lit its fairy lights early this year, casting a golden glow on passersby. Inside, Eleanor Davis stood behind the register, her fingers brushing the spine of a poetry book she wasn’t reading.

She hadn’t thought about him in months.

Or at least, that’s what she told herself every morning.

It had been seven years since Leo Whitaker had walked out of her life — seven years since he got on a plane to Paris with a dream and no return ticket. No goodbye. Just a note on the kitchen counter: “If I stay, I’ll resent you. If I go, maybe I’ll learn how not to.”

She had burned that note. Twice.

The bell above the door jingled, a gust of wind following the man who stepped in. Eleanor looked up out of habit—and dropped the poetry book.

Leo.

Older now. A little more stubble, fewer curls. But the same eyes. Blue-gray like the sea on a stormy day. He smiled, sheepish. “Hey, Elle.”

Her breath caught. No one called her that anymore.

She blinked. “Are you lost?”

He chuckled softly. “Kinda. I was walking around town, trying to figure out if you’d still be here.”

“Why?”

“Because I... I never stopped wondering if you’d forgive me.”

She folded her arms, suddenly cold. “It’s been seven years.”

“I know.”

“You left.”

“I did.”

He stepped closer, the air between them charged. “I was scared, Elle. Scared of staying in one place. Of becoming someone ordinary.”

Her voice cracked. “And you thought I was the thing holding you back.”

Leo’s gaze dropped. “No. You were the only thing that felt real. That’s what terrified me most.”

They stood in silence, only the soft hum of a Christmas carol playing in the background.

“You became a photographer, right?” she asked, finally.

“Yeah,” he nodded. “Got published a few times. Lived out of a suitcase. Took pictures of strangers and sunsets.”

“And were you happy?”

He hesitated. “Sometimes. But I never took another picture of someone I loved.”

Her heart twisted. “Don’t say that.”

“Why not? It’s true.”

“You don’t get to show up like a ghost and say things like that.” Her voice trembled. “I mourned you, Leo. You were alive, but you were gone.”

“I know. I—I didn’t expect you to forgive me. I just needed to see you. One last time.”

Eleanor looked at him closely. “One last time?”

He hesitated. “I’m moving again. Tokyo this time. Permanent gig.”

“So this is closure?” she said bitterly. “That’s what you’re here for?”

“I didn’t know what I was here for.” He exhaled. “Until I saw you again.”

The door creaked open, and a delivery guy poked his head in. “Eleanor? Flowers for you.”

She frowned as the man handed over a bouquet of peonies. Her favorite. No note.

Leo blinked. “You have someone?”

“I did,” she said quietly. “We ended things last spring.”

He looked relieved and then immediately guilty. “I'm sorry. That’s not fair of me to feel that way.”

She smiled, sad and tired. “Do you remember the bench on Rosewood Hill?”

“Our spot,” he said instantly.

“I still go there. Every year on New Year’s Day.”

Leo looked up. “You do?”

“I sit there and talk to you. Even when I hated you.”

He looked like he might cry.

“I loved you so much, Leo. Enough to let you go. But I never thought you’d actually disappear.”

“I was a coward.”

She nodded. “Yes. You were.”

Silence stretched again, soft but heavy.

Then, Eleanor reached below the counter and pulled out a worn envelope. She handed it to him.

“I wrote to you. Years ago. Never sent it.”

He opened it slowly, eyes scanning the page. She watched his lips move as he read:

“If you ever come back, I hope it’s because you chose me, not because you failed somewhere else.”

He looked up. “I did choose you. I just... didn’t know how to love you without ruining it.”

She held his gaze. “And now?”

“I think I’ve learned. But I’m not asking for anything. Just... maybe come with me to Rosewood Hill. One more time. If only to say goodbye properly.”

Eleanor didn’t speak. She simply nodded.

Two Weeks Later — New Year’s Day

The sky was painted in soft oranges and fading blues. The town was still and silent as Eleanor climbed the hill. She almost didn’t expect him to be there.

But he was. Sitting on the same bench, holding a thermos of coffee in gloved hands.

“I wasn’t sure you'd come,” he said.

“I wasn’t either,” she replied.

They sat in quiet for a while, sipping coffee and watching the sun set on the first day of the new year.

Then he pulled out a camera.

“You mind?”

She shook her head. He lifted the lens slowly, reverently — as if afraid to break the moment.

The shutter clicked.

He looked at her. “That’s the first photo I’ve taken of someone I love... since you.”

Eleanor smiled, just barely. “Don’t screw it up this time.”

And maybe, just maybe, he wouldn’t.

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