
I’m born in silence. High above the world, in a cradle of chilled mist and quiet clouds, I begin. A single crystal spun from vapor, shaped uniquely by the cold breath of the sky. No other is quite like me, and yet I am not alone. We gather in stillness, suspended in a world of grey. Then, with a nudge from the wind, we begin to fall.
It is not falling, not really. It’s floating—drifting—like feathers on a whispered breeze. Below us, the earth stretches in anticipation. The world holds its breath. We descend slowly, gently, dancing in silence as the sky sends us downward.
Each flake that joins me paints the world a little whiter. Together, we soften the sharp edges of roofs and fences, wrap tree branches in white sleeves, and hush the very air. Children press their noses to frosted windows. Birds take shelter. Even the wind quiets for a while.
We shimmer. We glisten. We glow beneath moonlight and twinkle beneath streetlamps. In the stillness of night, I feel like I belong—like I am part of something bigger than myself.
Days pass. I remain where I landed, nestled atop a bed of snowflakes just like me. We talk in crackles and squeaks, in the hush of midnights and early mornings. The sun rises each day, weak and golden, casting long shadows that stretch over our perfect surface. No one dares to step yet.
But soon they come. Boots crush us. Tires churn us into slush. Sleds scrape us raw. Children laugh as they shape us into balls and forts and frozen friends. I don’t mind. I like the laughter. It is warm and alive.
Still, something inside me begins to change. The sun climbs higher each day, lingering longer. Its rays are gentler than the wind’s push, but more powerful. I feel myself loosening, softening. The edges that once defined me begin to blur. I am no longer just a snowflake. I am becoming… something else. I try to hold on. But the warmth is persistent.
Around me, others begin to melt—first in corners and shadows, then in open spaces. Our white world turns patchy, revealing the dull brown earth we once covered so proudly. Trees drip. Gutters sing with rushing water. Even the cold wind has changed; it carries a hint of spring.
I look up at the sky. The clouds are no longer heavy with snow. They are light and fast-moving, carrying birds and sunshine instead of frost. I know my time is nearly done. And then, I melt.
It happens slowly. One drop at a time, I lose myself. I seep into the earth, unnoticed, unmarked. But it’s not the end. I trickle down, joining others in a stream that feeds the roots of trees. I wind through soil, finding my place once more in this ever-turning world. Eventually, I reach a stream, then a river. I rush forward now, no longer silent or still. I babble. I flow. I move with purpose.
And then, after many days, I feel the pull of the sun again. I rise. Invisible now, I drift back up into the sky, light as air. I do not remember every detail of the life I lived on earth, but I remember the feeling—of drifting, of shining, of becoming something beautiful if only for a short while. And I know I will return.
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Author's Note:
This microfiction is inspired by the quiet elegance of snowfall, transformation, and the eternal cycle of nature. The snowflake’s journey reminds us of change, impermanence, and beauty in even the briefest of lives.
Thank you for reading.
About the Creator
Muhammad Rahim
I’m a passionate writer who expresses truth, emotion, and creativity through storytelling, poetry, and reflection. I write to connect, inspire, and give voice to thoughts that matter.




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