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The Order That Changed Everything

The Last Order

By Hamid Hussain ShahPublished 9 months ago 3 min read
The Last Order

"The Last Order"High above Earth, two men floated in silence inside the International Space Station.

One was Captain Jim Carter, an astronaut from the United States. He was tall, calm, and loved space since he was a child.

The other was Commander Ivan Morozov, a cosmonaut from Russia. He was strong, serious, and proud to represent his country.

They were not friends, but they respected each other. Together, they worked on science missions, checked the station systems, and shared meals.

Their countries were not always friendly, but up here, they were just two men looking down at the world.

They laughed sometimes. They watched sunrises and sunsets 16 times a day. Life in space was peaceful.

But peace doesn’t always last.

Smoke On The Earth

One morning, Jim looked out the window.

“Ivan,” he called. “Come look.”

Ivan floated over. His eyes widened.

Below them, dark clouds covered cities. Fires burned across the land. Flashes lit up the atmosphere—not storms, but something worse.

Jim turned on the communication system.

Only static.

No NASA. No Roscosmos. No voices.

Then, a few minutes later, two separate messages arrived.

One for Jim. One for Ivan.

Each message was short. Cold.

Jim’s message: “The Russian has been labeled a threat. Final order: Neutralize him. Secure American future.”

Ivan’s message: “The American has turned against us. You are ordered to eliminate him. Secure Russian survival.”

Both men stared at each other. Silence filled the room.

Alone in Orbit

They went to opposite ends of the station.

Jim stayed in the American lab. Ivan returned to the Russian module.

Each man held a small weapon—not a gun, but a sharp tool meant for repairs. In space, even a screwdriver can be deadly.

Jim’s heart beat fast. He thought of his wife and daughter back home. Were they alive?

Ivan thought of his little boy and his elderly mother. Were they safe?

The orders were clear. But their hands did not move.

Hours passed.

Jim whispered, “This can’t be real.”

Ivan said nothing. But his eyes were full of pain.

The Meeting

Finally, Jim floated to the center of the station and turned on the intercom.

“Ivan,” he said. “We need to talk.”

A long pause. Then Ivan’s voice replied, soft but firm. “I agree.”

They met in the middle—between their two modules.

Jim raised his hands to show he carried nothing. Ivan did the same.

“Do you believe the orders?” Jim asked.

“I believe… war has begun,” Ivan said. “But I don’t want to fight you.”

Jim nodded. “Me neither.”

They floated in silence.

“I don’t know who started this war,” Jim said. “But I know we don’t have to finish it.”

Ivan looked down. “If we kill each other, what will remain?”

“Just emptiness,” Jim replied.

The Choice

They turned off the weapons system. They shut down the encrypted order logs. They erased the commands from their computers.

They chose peace.

Together, they began checking the station’s systems. Supplies were low. Oxygen had to be monitored carefully. They couldn’t contact Earth, but they tried sending signals.

They shared stories of their families. They showed each other pictures. They laughed again. They cried sometimes.

They were no longer American or Russian.

They were just human.

A New Mission

Days turned to weeks.

Jim and Ivan worked together like brothers. They cleaned the station. They repaired systems. They kept hope alive.

One day, a weak signal reached them. A voice. Not from NASA or Roscosmos—but from a small team of survivors in a peaceful zone.

“Is anyone out there?” the voice asked.

Jim and Ivan looked at each other. Tears filled their eyes.

“Yes,” Jim said into the mic. “We’re here. We chose peace. We’re alive.”

Beyond the War

Months later, a new ship arrived.

It was built by people from many nations who survived. It carried new astronauts. It brought food, tools, and hope.

Jim and Ivan were honored. Their story was told across what was left of the world.

They had been given a final order to destroy each other.

But they chose to be brothers.

And that choice changed everything.

Conclusion:

This story is a reminder that even in the worst times, we can choose peace.

We all have the power to say no to hate.

When we look at Earth from space, there are no borders. No countries. Just one small planet that we all share.

Jim and Ivan could have become enemies.

But instead—they became heroes.

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About the Creator

Hamid Hussain Shah

"Welcome to a world of stories! Every tale here is filled with emotions, lessons, and inspiration. From life and dreams to adventures, I share stories that touch hearts and spark imaginations. Let’s journey together, one story at a time."

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