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The Table 2

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2024
Table of leaves (pexels.com)

An empty table

where are the people

to enjoy the space.

(An empty table could mean a lot of things to me. One reason for an empty table is because there is no family. Another reason for an empty table there could be no food, but still another reason for an empty table could be that no care to show up just to be together food or no food. A table's purpose to bring together those who care and share what is important with one another. I know in today's society its main purpose is to be a vehicle to serve and eat food with very little meaningful conversation except for maybe 'Pass the butter." or "Pass the ketchup." No one really shares their day around the table anymore maybe because they are so busy from school and work and other activities. There is one day or two that there is that allows for conversation even though there is a lot of passing around of food. One just has to listen to the others around the table.)

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    This is for sure a Top Story well done Mark ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Terri Kallochabout a year ago

    Or they sit around that table and stare at their phones.

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    So clever and thoughtful!

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Very thought provoking! Thank you for sharing.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Ah this brought back memories to when my Nonna was alive. Now her home is sold...and the family only meet up in smaller gatherings at smaller homes or in restaurants. Not really the same. Loved this little critique and well done on getting Top Story for it, Mark!

  • Linda Goodmanabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story. I'm reflecting on past gatherings as I write this. 💕

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Back to say congratulations on the top story, Mark! Well done!

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    Congrats on TS, well deserved.

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Mark, your point, along with the picture certainly and fully made such a legitimate point in today's culture. Well done!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    An excellent reflection, so somewhat sad, of the table's meaning to our current society. Good work, Mark.

  • Sitting around the table when growing up meant lingering around after dessert to hear the grown-ups sharing stories. The kids now run off to their rooms for computers, telephones and the table is empty.

  • Muraliabout a year ago

    I agree with you 💯.

  • Eloise Robertson about a year ago

    Good work

  • Sanjay Upadhyayabout a year ago

    nice story

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