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The Playground

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
a playground (pexels.com)

Swings and slides

seesaws and sandboxes

What fun there was.

(Who remembers going to the playground when they were younger, then going again when they became an adult with their own children or relatives. While there did you try to do some of the things that you used to as a child like sliding down the slide backwards or swinging so high then jumping off. That was what made going to the playground fun. One memory I really have and still cherish is that there was one playground that had a hill and I remember me, my nieces and nephew going to the top of the hill and laying down and then rolling down the hill and we did several times.)

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Your haiku and brief description take your reader on a lovely trip down memory lane, whether it be from their own childhood or the childhood of their offspring. Well done.

  • Omgggg, I miss those good old days! This was so nostalgic!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Yes, and when I was young there were not all the "safety" features. We did monkey bars at our own risk, the whirling simple merry go 'round, swings on metal frames, slides that were metal.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    I did that with my toddler son, pretending to do it for his safety.

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