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The Gray Door

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Cottage door (pexels.com)

Walking down the road where there is a cottage with a gray door, I always seem to notice flowers of some kind. One thing this cottage is empty on all accounts: when you look in the windows no furniture, nothing in the yard and no people. You begin to wonder who places all the flowers by the door. It does make the little cottage homey in appearance. If one listens really carefully the cottage says "Come live in me, I will make you feel comfortable for you and your family, but don't forget place some flowers by the door, okay.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    This was awesome , I hope this one goes for TS!

  • A lovely little micro story. I wish I could find such a fairy tale home.

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