Proud pleasing pumpkins promulgating Pride (Note: What about a pumpkins image or ego?)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Pumpkin says trick or treat let me lick your feet. (Note: Who remembers this old rhyme from childhood? I know I am pushing it with this haiku.)
Play pouncing pounding pondering playing. (Note: How many of these words have you seen acted out at a playground watching your child?)
Borrowing brilliant building block blueprints. (Note: How to you use old books?)
Cuddly caring curious clumsy children (Note: Does this describe or critique kids everywhere?)
Truly trusting trusty treating trouble-free. (Note: I think this critiques the reasons for having and loving a teddy bear.)
Towering tantalizing tourists to think. (Note: What do you think about this?)
Pondering pathways practical particular partner. (Note: I believe this describes Pooh Bear in a way. Share what you think.)
Thanks thoughts thinking thoroughly Thanksgiving! (I know it is kind of early, but it for some reason it said write me.)
Belief believing biblical believers begging. (Note: Begging to be a believer or begging for salvation.)
Planting pumpkins planning perfect pictures. (Note: Picture your Halloween pumpkin.)
Halloween haunted horrible hair-raising heretics. (Note: Not really sure of this one.)
